Pickled kippers? I liked the conversation between Archen and Bernice. It's interesting.

Question: N/A. I never played the game, so no. I didn't have the chance and unless it comes on a mobile release, I probably won't anytime soon.

A decent story overall. I just found an error I need to report. In this description for this chapter, it says the character Volan is not fond of Bianca. However, from reading the previous chapter, it seems to be Cheren that Volan dislikes. I thought you should know, since I feel that no matter how good a story is (and so far, it seems to be decent for an online story), even the tiniest unchecked mistake can send everything down the crapper.

Wow. I love this chapter. This theme, anger, coupled with the fact it had a more serious tone than previous chapters, it made me love it. Also, your description was great and I loved the meeting between Volan and Genesect

Oh, great. Awesome episode-chapter! The fight was extreme, Zinzolin was surprisingly powerful and Bernice's evolution (and Serperior) was delightful.

There's a small mistake in this chapter. When Volan and his friends first meet Jack Walker and Volan expresses his dislike of Pokemon rangers, you wrote that it was "Stephan" who commented that Volan resembled a Plasma. But wasn't Stephan currently at the Pokemon center waiting for Victini?

Oh, great chapter. Loved Volan's training session. But what I love more is the Genesect part. Hia "journey" is interesting, and I love his internal voice.

Oh, great chapter. Loved Volan's training session. But what I love more is the Genesect part. Hia "journey" is interesting, and I love his internal voice.

Awesome chapter, best by now. awesome for both Volan and Alder. The debate about names was pure genius. Loved Alder's past and how evil Ghetsis passed as in this chapter. Also, your Author's notes answered some of my questions.

Awesome chapter, 114. Loved the "dream sequence" best description of this fan fic. And can you tell me more about the filter in Spore: GA? you made me curious, and I have the game.

Oh, well thus chapter has the most dramatic moments, Thrin realising she is used and fighting N, and Volan's promise. But how did Zekrom?

Oh, well thus chapter has the most dramatic moments, Thrin realising she is used and fighting N, and Volan's promise. But how did Zekrom?

ok, the One Hundred ninth chapter gives some surprises. Yay, the joirney is coming to an end...or no? I like Alders dufficulty with names. Stephan can brethe a bit around him. and Good theory about making money, but what happens if a trainer doesn't win tournaments? Or even gym battles, as he is no genious trainer like-ahem-Volan? Can't wait to read what is coming next

Awesome. Best chapter by now. I loved the description, the feelings, environments, people
...Pokemon.
But the most I liked how you made Genesect manifest his thoughts as a journal. Cool concept.
Can't wait to see what he does next.
Oh I am dissapointed by N. He seems such an inconsistent chracter. I mean, is he stupid? he seems to really love Pokemon and is able to understand them...but he cannot see he is used or he is wrong in his need to trick Thrin? I don't know...

Wow. yeah Definitely not as climatic as hopef, but it did end on a happy note so that makes me happy.

Wow. Right when I thought there could be no surprises, Volan fought hard and cool in an awesome battle. Also, I love Cheren!