Reviews for Heart of a Sith
mearra chapter 34 . 1/17
Congratulations, it was really a very beautiful story. I read it in a few hours. You made me cry towards the end. it was a very touching end. that's what I would have liked to see in the movie of the return of the jedi. a beginning of relationship between vador, luke and leia. I would not have liked Vador to die but he left to save his son. Keep writing on star wars. :)
tractorlady41 chapter 34 . 5/4/2017
Really, really good alternate ending. Thanks!
Guest chapter 34 . 10/16/2016
AMAZING
Morriganna chapter 34 . 10/16/2016
This was brilliant! A few tears even shed from my eyes. Do you think you could make a dark side version where Darth Vader and Amidala raise their children?
Adrian chapter 1 . 9/25/2016
Please can you put a warning about Jade's inclusion in this fic at the start? It's annoying to get so far into a story only to discover that she's in it. I hate abandoning a fic so far in and I dislike being tricked into reading an EU compliant story. There are far too many good fics out there to waste time on ones I won't finish.
VioletErin.26 chapter 34 . 8/15/2016
Aww. Bittersweet ending. Love the story. Happy to see Lei and Luke together. I like happy endings. Happy they got to know their father.
dragongirl311 chapter 34 . 8/15/2016
OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOO GOOD! I love it! My tears are on your hands though. ANAKIN SHOULDN'T HAVE DIED! (Yes, I know that he really couldn't have lived but I still cried over his death) Anyway, good story. You are such a good author!
Rainbowdea chapter 34 . 6/7/2016
Wow... Just, Wow
Guest chapter 34 . 5/21/2016
This was a great read! I like that the twins were able to reconcile with their father; the Skywalker family feels are what I crave for in the series and I like that you gave insight to their inner turmoils. Plus, Leia got to train in the force, which always makes me happy. Thank you for writing this!
The Hope Lions chapter 34 . 12/31/2015
It was very good. I enjoyed it a lot.
Guest chapter 7 . 12/29/2015
And again here is the idea that it was not Palpatine's influence over the entirety of Anakin's adolescence and beyond or the extremes he was driven to by the 'Chosen One' drivel that lead him to a duality of entitlement because of his strength and inferiority due to how far he deviates from the 'perfect' Jedi that lead to his subversion and corruption, but making him 'half droid' that made him fall. Let's not forget, his fall started on Tatooine with his mother's dead and his extreme reaction, before any of his 'mechanization'.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/29/2015
I know its an idea that the Star Wars franchise puts forth, but I have to be honest, the idea that having a mechanical prosthesis is somehow dehumanizing really ticks me off. My grandfather lost his leg just below the knee to an infection... he struggled with that loss for the rest of his life. A coworker of mine also uses an insulin pump to regulate her type I diabetes, or my grandmother's pacemaker, or so many other examples of people with health issues 'turning themselves into machines'... while you are a phenomenal writer and I have loved your other stories, seeing the idea that Luke's temptation or Anakin's fall is due to them having mechanical parts and not a purely moral and psychological battle really makes me hesitant to even read further.
Mari Wollsch chapter 34 . 9/14/2015
lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Blake2020 chapter 2 . 8/6/2015
cool
Blake2020 chapter 1 . 8/6/2015
good start
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