Reviews for The wedding
dandelion66 chapter 5 . 7/6
I, too used to wonder how the forced capital wedding would be like if it really happens. And this is the best ever forced capital wedding I could've imagined, that filled with so much desire! I especially like that you keep Katniss's true self without neglecting her reservation and pride by having her crazily in love with Peeta all the way.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/1
I really like your writing.
It's not like some other Fanfiction sequels/alternate endings I've read.
The writing style is very similar to the author of The Hunger Games
Guest chapter 2 . 1/4
Somewhere, Snow is sitting with a bottle of lube and some tissues. Jackass.
hilster72 chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
Brilliant! So well written. Thankyou for sharing.
murmure etoile chapter 5 . 12/9/2014
Going to read the sequel right now...
lindsaydrumm chapter 5 . 12/2/2014
I think this was very well done. I'm off to read your sequel now :-)
4thkage chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
oh my godddd!
i really hate President Snow...
he's totally an evil bastard...
hate him so much...
stop bullying Katniss...
Peetabreadgirl chapter 3 . 9/19/2014
Awesome chapter! I almost cried along with them...
SFCBruce chapter 5 . 8/6/2014
I decided to wait until I was finished with the whole story before reviewing. This story was - amazing, incredible, and very, very moving. Peeta's patience, Katniss's reluctance, and the passion that they both found inside the other was - well, words really escape me. Awesome, awesome job :-) I wish I could write as well!

Thanks for posting and sharing this :-)
DevilTito chapter 5 . 8/1/2014
Beautifully written!
taylorvictoria0591 chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
I just came across this on ÀO3 and its amazing you are truly talented!
FrenchFanOfAusten chapter 5 . 5/6/2014
You don't know how much I thank you for these 4 amazing chapters! Your writing style is great, and the way you described their passion for each other.. unbelievably well written! (:
I hope you'll soon add a sequel, I can't wait to read more... Congratulations again (:
Oh, and followed and favorite story, of course
cfigueroa78 chapter 2 . 4/3/2014
Unbelievable. She calls herself a Capitol whore and mentions the urge to vomit when she's in bed with Peeta. Does she know what her fellow victors go through? They go through a real hell of being sold to the highest bidder. They would give anything to be married off to someone sweet and caring in exchange to being whored out. She really is clueless and I'm annoyed because she's so cold and self centered. Haymitch nailed it when he said she could live a thousand lifetimes and never deserve Peeta. She should have told Peeta beforehand because even though the room has cameras, she didn't think about sound. It really made everything look like the horrible mess it was if they can hear the dialogue. She's so stupid. Maybe selling her would be best and then she can know what it truly means to be a Capitol whore.
cfigueroa78 chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
Great story! So excited to read it. I understand the anger and frustration of being forced into a marriage you have no say over but I always thought Katniss was too blind to realize how fortunate she was. Peeta is the best guy out there - he surpasses them all. Would she prefer being forced to marry a dirty old man? Sold into prostitution? In other words, I always hated how she made it sound like being with Peeta was a death sentence. In canon when he was hijacked and he hated her I was upset like everyone else but it was an eye opener for her of what she took for granted. An amazing man who adores her and would never harm her and it took him to loathe her to realize this about him. I love Katniss,months get me wrong but I was always concerned with how survival was so central in her life that love was something she had no clue about or how to love. Except for Prim.
VanillaSnowflake chapter 5 . 3/28/2014
Awww, that was great! I love the "forced marriage" trope! You did a beautiful job writing steamy and hot virgin Everlark sex. I'm glad that you wrote a sequel and I'm looking forward to reading it!
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