Wow, this is a very nice story. Int

Goodness I dont even know where to start, and I’m just on chapter 2! Usually tales about serendipitously-agreed-upon rendez-vous make the build up from first encounter to the actual smut fairly clumsy. And you know, we as readers tend to forgive that. But omg—you’ve completely raised the bar for everyone else! You somehow inserteded character building, sophistication, and jolly-good dialogue into this! Your writing just flows. This is really one of those, “I’m jealous of the people who get to read this the very first time” situations. And best yet, you made me laugh out loud, several times.

If you’re not an author somewhere making actual money for your writing, you should be.

I commented back in 2018 how I was rereading this story and I wanted to drop in and say that in 2024 I have sought out this story ONCE AGAIN because it truly is worth the reread every couple of years! Hope you're doing well and this story ages like fine wine.

"I have been as oddly fortunate in repaying life debts as I have been oddly prolific in gaining them. It is one of the reasons I still find myself believing that a higher power must exist." He frowned into his tea mug. "I'm fairly sure it continues to keep me alive, despite everything, for its personal amusement."

OHH SEV! yes higher power (author) kept you alive for our (readers) amusement

I am so glad that I read this. This was a very sweet story. Also, I did love the smut.

id say sweet, bitter sweet ending, so lovely, annnd done.. thats the bitter

Such a lovely story!

This was honestly the most refreshing SSHG ive read in forever. Def feeling revived. The “story” style lemons were great. I didnt want to put it down.

Mmmmmm... lemony and sweet! Thanks for sharing this.

OUTSTANDING!

Ahhhh, well-written smut AND emotional journeys for our two heroes. Thank you for this healthful dose of Vitamin Lemon :)

I love rereading this story. It makes me happy and hopeful and smiley.
The only thing that can make it more satisfying and complete is the breaking up with Ron. I think it's implied, but it still feels missing. He needs to be told off.

Great story! Thanks for sharing.

Such a lovely story! Perfectly characterised, with beautifully written steamy sex scenes and immaculate grammar and spelling - what's not to love?! I adored this story, thank you so much for writing it!

Hey, just finished your story and lived it! It was very well written and engaging. Nice one!