Reviews for Getting Past Broken
TreeGoddess-Odrade chapter 4 . 7/3/2014
Incredibly well done! Awkwardness, hope, miscommunication, humor, mishaps, brainiacs and sexy time. Woowee!
TreeGoddess-Odrade chapter 3 . 7/3/2014
I had to review and tell you that this has to be one of the very best lemons I've ever read, and that's saying a LOT. Severus was so patient and focused, intense but sure. He really *got* her triggers and how to avoid them. She certainly enjoyed herself and now knows how it feels to be the subject of his focus and talented fingers. The humor and trust between them was surely felt as well. Brava. xoxo
EclecticBonVivant chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
Sexy and sweet all at the same time - keep the great works coming!
Brightki chapter 6 . 6/19/2014
No matter how many times I read this story, I just fall in love with it over again! 3
Wolfisis chapter 6 . 6/1/2014
I loved this.
Rosajean chapter 6 . 5/16/2014
Fantastic story! Absolutely loved it!
arctic-kat chapter 6 . 4/30/2014
This story has blown me away! I love it, thank you!
Bithja chapter 6 . 4/28/2014
Hi there :)

I've just found and read your story and I want to say this directly at the beginning: I liked it. It gave me a warm, comfortable feeling and sometimes it made me a little bit hot. Good job on that part.

Now, as you said you would like a little feedback on Hermiones PTSD ... I experienced something similiar, though not as frightening. It was enough to have me panic and cry in the end and left me unable to have sex. I am in a relationship with a man for over three years now, he is the most loving, caring, understanding person I ever met. Still, we only had sex once in the beginning of the relationship and never afterwards, because I just couldn't. When ever I noticed his breath getting heavier, his caresses getting more demanding, I just felt disgust and panic. I am in therapy now for about half a year and we managed to have sex at last for one more time. I feel like I am able to slowly enjoy it and not panic or feel disgusted.
This said ... I just want to point out that it took me about three years and more than half a year of therapy to be able to have sex just once. I do not know about other cases and other people, I just think that you made it a little bit too easy for Hermione. Even though it was a very special kind of trigger and it was only this one position that was impossible for her, I still thought that her first sex with Snape went on a little bit too fast and too smooth. For the sake of thsi story a really in depth analysis of Hermiones psychological problems would have been too much, the story would have had to go on much longer and I don't know if anybody out there is really interested in that kind of thing. Still, I thought it was just too smooth. On the other hand, the way Snape and Hermione "happen" to notice that she at last is able to enjoy him directly on top of her, that was really good. My therapist always points out that it is practice and practice and practice that will make me overcome my fear, so I think your final solution was believable and well thought.

I do know that this is fiction, that this never was meant to be in depth psychological and I do appreciate your way of handling Hermiones problems as the story continues. It's only the beginning which was a little bit to smooth and fast for my liking.

I really enjoyed reading it and I love your way of creating intimate moments full of emotions. Great work overall :) I makes me want to try all your other works!
mcamastow chapter 6 . 4/3/2014
Liked it very much would not have minded more .
electricdust chapter 6 . 3/30/2014
I really like how you portrayed Severus' handling of something so important as confronting her fear, and helping her feel safe. Really made the story work. great job!
Momkey627 chapter 6 . 3/24/2014
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! I love it!
Agcadx1 chapter 6 . 3/23/2014
This was. Totally hot!
madhatter8271 chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
This is an awesome story...and God Almighty it was hot! Whew...it made me sweat a bit!
LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL chapter 6 . 2/25/2014
Brilliant! Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
RhodaBush chapter 6 . 2/24/2014
I would love to re a sequel!
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