|Reviews for You're the one on the card!|
| modeluchosen1 chapter 7 . 4/3/2014
| Dan1234567890 chapter 17 . 3/18/2014
Oh boy... Oh. Boy. LOL xD
| Dan1234567890 chapter 16 . 3/18/2014
Endearing characters: your story always makes me smile at some point. And good writing, as always!
| Raubritter chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
Hmmm. It looks like yuri, smells like yuri, tastes like yuri, dropped a handful of bombs indicating that it could be yuri, but I still can't figure out if it's yuri.
| htffan951 chapter 17 . 1/26/2014
Still a tad bit confusing in the beginning, but the rest was nice. Can't wait to read more.
| htffan951 chapter 16 . 1/25/2014
This was a nice chapter though I will have to say it got slightly confusing once Cyn and Mason along with the others started to talk. I was rather confused on what was going on, were they were, and what they were talking about. Other then that this was nice. congrates on the test, and I will be looking forward to read more.
| C W Sherman chapter 15 . 12/30/2013
Lookin' forward to your next chapter Thassalian, so far I have enjoyed this story a lot.
| Dan1234567890 chapter 15 . 12/28/2013
Ohhh I see what you did there! And there!
Haha, good job. Looking forward to reading more.
| Dan1234567890 chapter 14 . 12/28/2013
I wonder what that thing looks like...xD
Well done once again! Glad to be back reading this :)
| htffan951 chapter 15 . 12/12/2013
well this chapter was nice, however I was confused at some points, mostly near the end. I think it was Chandra talking to Garruk about finding Jace, but was this before they met Adeli, or after? other then the confusion this was still a good chapter and I do wonder what will happen next.
| Dan1234567890 chapter 13 . 12/6/2013
Nicely written once again, and funny! Good job.
Wish you best of luck with all your stuff! YOU'LL MAKE IT :)
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| Dan1234567890 chapter 5 . 12/6/2013
You obviously had fun doing this xD
All the while retaining some measure of restraint, well done. (the 2nd place was a good idea, too, our heroes don't always win indeed!)
| Dan1234567890 chapter 2 . 12/6/2013
Very well written. Enjoying this a lot :)
Keep up the good work!