|Reviews for Fallen Angel|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/8
This Story Needs A Lot Of Work
| gabby1017 chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
Hey Liz... There is so much going on that the story feels rushed... a lot of great ideas that need more detail and characterization...
But I enjoyed what I read... would love to see you take this further... really branch out your chapters.
| Cristi chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Lovely story, congrats Liz :)
| cloemarrie chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Good plot but with a little beta work it should be great.