|Reviews for Into the Light|
| Guest chapter 32 . 1/6
This was a pretty good story. Very interesting take on how Dean healed Sam. Would be interesting to see the powers he now has expanded on. Everyone was in character and believable. I really enjoyed reading it. Would have enjoyed more chapters from Sam's POV. And there is one thing I'm confused on. How did a C4 explosion kill demons? Or did I miss something? Overall great story.
| Lewlou15 chapter 32 . 1/7
This story was so friggen awesome!
I loved it!
| Lewlou15 chapter 13 . 1/6
The last few lines of this chapter are bittersweet considering what happened it the mid season finale! :(
Greay chapters! I love this story!
| Lewlou15 chapter 9 . 1/6
Gah! I've been reading this story steadily for the last hour and a half and was going to wait to post a review once I'd read the whole thing but this chapter!
Wow! Heart breaking and angsty and... Wow!
Poor Dean, you capture his voice and his guilt so well. And Cas is just so lost. And sweet, sweet Sammy. Forgivness is devine!
Favorite line: "... back quietly from the room, unnoticed by the two men who, even after all this time, still stand together against the world. Against everything."
That line right there is the epitome of the whole Supernatural universe!
Well done! Back to the story for me!
| LilyBolt chapter 32 . 1/5
This chapter. Was. AWESOME. I laughed out loud at the randomness of Dean thought at the beginning, because it was so believable, and so DEAN, in the way it was described. And can I just say, the image in my head of all of them together at the end... (Not to mention that Baby had survive this one intact, unlike so many of the deceased beautiful classics from the garage...lol) It made me smile and smile and tear up a little and then keep smiling. :D Excellent job with that! And, you know, excellent job with literally EVERYTHING else. Honestly, I'm with Dean. I don't have the words to describe how amazing this was. But it brought me a feeling of 'joy' too. ;) This was such a creative story, with a fabulous mix of action and emotion, and it even had a coherent plot. (I know you said you didn't really plan it, but judging by how it turned out I wouldn't never have guessed that.) As a whole, this story has made me laugh, cry, get angry at the bad guys, want to hug the good guys, and basically was a completely incredible read. Thank you so SO much for sharing this with us. It is already on my favorites list, but if I could, I would favorite it all over again. :D Here's to whatever you write next! I have complete faith that I'll enjoy it. :)
P.S. If part 2 ever does slap you I'd be very excited to read it. However, I totally respect this as a masterpiece all it's own too, so no worries if there isn't a part 2. ;)
| LilyBolt chapter 31 . 12/29/2013
First, a moment of grief for Adriella... She turned out to be a true ally, and perished a noble, albeit brutal death. . . . Now that I've said my bit regarding Adriella's demise, can I just say THIS WAS AWESOME! I love the way you let Dean and Sam go in together after Adriella. Of course, it was smart of Sam to not send Dean alone. You can never trust Dean to value his life enough to get out before it's too late. :P And I am SO glad Kevin is still alive thus far. I feel terrible for Adriella, but I admit I was relieved it wasn't the young Prophet in ribbons on the floor. I barely coped with his death in the show, and I doubt I would handle it very well here either, since this whole story has become its own sort of show to me. :D And that last line... "And the world explodes around us." That was a powerful little sentence to leave off on. It definitely left me craving the next chapter. ;) Keep up the brilliance my friend!
| jojospn chapter 30 . 12/22/2013
And here I was thinking you were going to kill Cas! Awesome chapter! And Merry Christmas!
| LilyBolt chapter 30 . 12/21/2013
I am actually on the verge of tears right now, and it's all because this was SO WELL DONE! When Cas saved Dean, I genuinely thought he had died. For a moment I was as much in shock as Dean was, and then I was sure he was gone, in a final valiant act if saving his friend's life. But then he was still alive, and I couldn't avoid hoping... And then Sam healed him. By the way, AWESOME use of Sam's angel blood situation. I liked Castiel's explanation too. Especially the possibility that the demon blood had an effect as well. And when Cas was safe, I nearly cried tears of relief, that's how much this story has pulled me in and stayed believable. This whole chapter was pure gold. No, not even gold is enough to cover this one. It was like, pure starlight or something else magnificent and stunning. ;) Can't wait until next week for the next chapter!
P.S. I really enjoyed you Abbaadon vs. Crowley sequence. And Crowley calling her "Abby"? Brilliant! :D Also, yay that Kevin chose to come back too! :)
P.P.S. Thank for such awesome chapters, and have a great holiday!
| LilyBolt chapter 29 . 12/19/2013
OMG! This was just freaking so unbelievably awesome and now you're leaving?! lol I understand completely if you can' post really soon, but I won't deny myself the selfish request that you try. ;) Really, this chapter is fantastic. I am SOOOO desperate to know what happens next. Just...The way you described the battle, and the way you gave demonic smoke forms some kind of substance/rules for how to injure them...It made this even more awesome and it felt chaotic as I read, as if I was in the battle too. Not to mention the plan Dean has is brilliant. Let's just hope he lives to see it through, right? lol Whether you can post tomorrow or not, I still really look forward to the next chapter. And you deserve to be told how amazing you are, yet again. :D
| jojospn chapter 29 . 12/19/2013
Another awesome cliffie! As for updates, if you can soon, awesome, if not, worry pas. Have a great holiday!
| LilyBolt chapter 28 . 12/17/2013
The goodbye scenes in this were just so full of emotion! They definitely weren't over the top. You didn't have Kevin start bawling or Cas give Dean and Sam some giant weepy hug...You simply made it /very/ clear how much the brothers would be missed if it all went belly up in the end. I must tip my hat to your ability to poke and prod my feels with ease. :D Also, Holy shit! What do you mean "they're here"?! But the next chapter isn't yet...How am I supposed to wait? I'm already battling one Hellatus, I can't handle two! Even if your is technically not even close to a real break at all. lol At any rate, I guess I have no choice but to just wait here then. ;) Keep up the stupendous job!
P.S. The image of Kevin and Cas driving off in the Impala, narrated by Sam's thoughts on how strange it was to see them ride away in his and Dean's home whilst they prepare to possibly die...If the resat of this chapter didn't crack my heart (which it totally did), then that part definitely did the trick!
| jojospn chapter 28 . 12/17/2013
Quite a tearjerker there! Great chapter! Looking forward to your next update!
| jojospn chapter 27 . 12/15/2013
Nicely done! You did a great job with Adriella's POV. And the brotherly stuff gets me every time!
| LilyBolt chapter 27 . 12/14/2013
You managed to use Adriella's POV to emphasize the intensity of the brothers' bond and personalities and just /who they are/, all so much more than if you had used Sam or Dean's perspective directly. This was truly awesome! Also, I really enjoyed the way you wrote Adriella. She had a very distinct voice, which further proves your skill at clearly defining each of the characters you write. Brilliant job! :D I am 'patiently' waiting for chapter 28. ;) lol
| jojospn chapter 26 . 12/11/2013
Holy shit, what a cliff hanger! Great work!