|Reviews for Naruto's Revenge|
| Mr. Nine chapter 6 . 2/16
I like this story can't wait for more please update soon
| thedarkpokemaster chapter 6 . 1/30
wow not bad I have to say a little shocking to see how Dark Naruto is right now I just hope that he can be saved.
| KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 3 . 1/26
You should go back and fix the mistakes, hard to read the story and get into with all the mistakes, however it is pretty much same as canon except you changed Naruto and Sasuke's roles around.
Sasuke's character should not be like a carbon copy of Naruto, in other words not a complete idiot.
| KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 2 . 1/26
You need to focus on more on your sentence structures.
Also your Sasuke was acting like a carbon copy of Naruto. It is like you just changed the roles of Naruto and Sasuke.
| KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 1 . 1/26
Should fix the spelling mistakes in the chapter. You also leave words out. You really need to work on how you structure your sentences. A great story though a pain to read because you have words missing.
Why did Orochimaru put the Curse Seal on Naruto?
Don't give Naruto a pairing if you do it make it some from Oto. Also Kurama's chakra is far more powerful that Orochimaru's Curse Seal. Kurama's chakra would never been weaker than Orochimaru's curse seal. Maybe with the control Naruto has over the Kyuubi the level 2 stage of the Curse Seal is stronger.
Also hopefully some originality will be in the next chapter. Pretty much same as canon but instead of Sasuke it was Naruto.
Needs a little more work but you have a good story here.
| Darkwarrior0416 chapter 6 . 1/26
| Sunrise moon 2 chapter 6 . 1/25
I agree with TheObserver101.
| TheObserver101 chapter 6 . 1/25
Can you please stop having Narutop hate the Yondaime, Naruto is supposed to smart and cunning in this. Their is no reason for him to think of Minato as a bad father for sealing the Kyuubi into him.
Firstly, Naruto knows nothing about sealing or what happened on the night.
Secondly, Naruto has only survived due to having Kyuubi.
Thirdly, Minato did not tell anybody that he has the Kyuubi in him.
Finally, Minato is not responsible for the villagers stupidity.
Naruto does not need to hate the Yondaime to hate Konoha. Konoha has been so bad to Naruto that not even his father being the Yondaime could change his mind. In fact Naruto should feel annoyed that despite his parents sacrificing their lives for the village, their only child was demonised tortured, abused and shunned.
In fact I am 100% sure that Minato would agree with Naruto in his decision to leave konoha. Maybe not the decision to destroy it, as I am sure that Minato would prefer that Naruto just puts Konoha behind him and try to lead a happy life somewhere else. However, Minato would stick by any decision his son makes as he trusts Naruto to save the world, even if it is from Konoha.
I like the concept of this story, and really that is my only complaint about the story. Naruto is supposed to be smarter and less of a doormat leading him to hating the village, but Naruto needs to realise that he too was saved from the kyuubi by having it sealed inside of him. Moreover, despite him not knowing it, it was Kyuubi that did the final blow to Minato and Kushina, although they were both going to die anyway due to plot.
In conlusion please let Naruto grow up and think logically, as I can not stomach stupidity from someone trying to destroy a whole village, makes him seem like team rocket or something.
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/24
| Kurama Thunderstorm chapter 6 . 1/24
it's wicked dude..
| monkeylovermarie6 chapter 6 . 1/24
this chapter is great:):):)!
| Universal-Public-Cockblocker chapter 6 . 1/24
Awsome chapter. And Tobito being there was totally unexpected, yet awsome all the same. And Akaruto (Akatsuki-Naruto) is badassery at its finest. I hope he does join, Naruto trained by Tobito would be an awsome plot twist. Seeing as this Naruto is waaaayyyyy different than canon, having him join Tobito and be an antagonistic instead of a hero would be great.
But other than that, great chapter. Cant wait to see what Sasuke will do now with this info.
| NaruSaku fan 100 chapter 5 . 12/15/2013
wow a sweet chapter man seems like Naruto is going dark even more.
| Coolestbee chapter 5 . 12/14/2013
I just found out u updated. Pls update soon. Tins r gettin interestin.
| thedarkpokemaster chapter 5 . 11/26/2013
oh boy things look dark for Naruto right now.