Reviews for Morning Haze
Sailor Onyx Pluto chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
Wow... that was super hot and steamy! Absolutely loved it! Great job on writing this one as I loved reading it. I like how you're taking their relationship to new levels, and speaking on staying within the confines of the first movie, are there going to be eventual snippets of what the twins do when they start taking down the mafia soldiers and bosses? Might read the next one tomorrow after work. Got some projects of my own to work on, but I always love reading your work.
sweetkiwi604 chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
Love the blindfold idea!
NikixXx chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Awesome!
PiercedHeart114 chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
FINALLY! I'm not sure if that's because you got the three of them into bed together or because there is finally another story but either way this was great!
OnTheWildside chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
I appreciate that someone else loves Ferngully. Also, the smut. I always appreciate smut!
pitbullsrok chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
yes my phone is wonky and i cant log in properly.
HOT HOT HOT! This was incredible Val, but I already knew it would be!
Feel free to snatch any ideas you want (pun intended) ;-)
Incog Ninja chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
"S'better cartoons on, too, proper ones wit' mutants an'transformers 'n shit," Murphy adds hopefully.
- this is why Murph's my boy.

but really just succeeds in making my breath catch in my throat.
- uhh, yeah.

I feel like, with all the church and praying and everything, the boys could've at least given me a heads up that this is what's waiting in the afterlife.
- hee!

Aww, so sweet!
Siarh chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
I have so missed Lass and the boys. Im also very happy you were finally able to get theses three to step over this line in thier relationship!

AND you included FernGully in with it!

I'm not sure I could love this story any more!
jouetdedestin chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Wow, just...um...wow!
Huntersgrrrll chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Love your stuff!
irishartemis chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
You are an evil evil woman...And you are going to kill me one day with all of this.
Leyshla Gisel chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Fantastic.
DeDe324 chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
I'm so glad you're back. I'm missed these three so, so much.

These stories literally just keep getting better and better. Every time I think I have a favorite in the arc, you just manage to replace it. I love how you have her not know which twin is which for most of the story (once the sexy times start anyway) and even the reader is constantly guessing. And I adore how she figures it out and then explains why it should have been obvious from the start.

I always enjoy how you write the banter between the three of them in these stories. Whether it's all three or just two of them, it works so well and is so fun to read.

I like that this was the way the boys eased her into having both of them at the same time and... good gracious... was it a delicious read. And Murphy was so sweet making sure she was okay with it. I really love your interpretation of these two and your OC is one of my favorites in the fandom (if not my favorite). I'm really excited for where this arc takes you next.

You are definitely back in the swing of things, my friend, but was there really any doubt you would be? Now I'm gonna go hum "Purple Haze" for the rest of the day because you managed to get that stuck in my head.
mcmannusdixon chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
No doubt that you are back in the swing of it. Lovely darling, and hot.
Riain chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Hot damn V! Bout time she gets a double feature! *fans self * the boys together.. Makes a girl go mmmhmmh. Can't wait to see what's up next! Great job!
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