|Reviews for Icha Icha Paradise: The Jinchuuriki and the Hyuga Heiress|
| Dick chapter 1 . 5/17
Horny hinata got some skill. Dat bullshit
| LW12 chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
it was good
| Naruto fan chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
WOW. How can u write like that? Damn! I'm all WET!
| Metal Monstrosity chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
| Lovely Bubbles 45 chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
*bark bark* great story
| a fan chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
Raptorcloak has taught you well.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
I like the way you did hinata.
Anyway Can you put yakumo kurama (to complete the clan heiresses and because she is not in many lemons) and pakura (who also is not in many lemons) in you clan restoration lemon.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
Awesome job and thanks for adding kurotsuchi
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Would you pair naruto up with yugito the two tails, or naruto with a female kybuui( female nine tails)
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
I like this hinata, very cool
Can u make the next iCha icha with tsunade
| ScarletVirus33 chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
It's official! Sexy has finally returned to the NaruHina series and I for one am very grateful. Thank you DarkChild316 for restoring my faith in my favorite Naruto couple. It has been way to long since Naruto and Hinata were allowed to let their freak flag fly higher than someone smoking reefer (marijuana for those not hip).
I haven't been this psyched about a NaruHina lemon in a long time. As far as sensuality, lust and overall hotness goes this bad boy right here is only second to my all time favorite lemon brought to us by "TheDancingKiller." But what separates this work of lust from the former was that Naruto didn't get rough with his lavender goddess and treated her with tenderness and passion. Okay the thrusting part was a little harsh but somehow I get the feeling that my girl Hinata didn't mind so much (who knew!).
My favorite part of the lemon was a technique that for some reason has not been executed to the best of my knowledge. This is probably the first time I've seen Naruto spoon with anybody regardless of the sex of the person yet I when read through it makes all the sense in the world.
Come to think of it given time this tale will overtake the "TheDancingKiller's" work of BDSM. And just like the aforementioned work of lust & thrust this story will received multiple read overs as long as this site stays up. I don't know who this Raptorcloak fella is but I have this person as well as DarkChild316 to thank for reminding me why Naruto and Hinata are my couple. Know that I will add this to my collection of favorite NaruHina fics for multiple perusals.
Until next time, SV33 out!
| TYZO300 chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
OK 1. I agree the is really a good position it combines sex and making love altogether. 2. Seriously dude sharing info on your lovelife not right. And 3. There's a lemon on a couple in different anime I like but the female in it is how I should say Stoic and serious while the male is exact opposite and by that I mean peppy and poetic . So please PM me when you get this so I can get some help in making this lemon since your at creating a romantic side to most non-romance characters.
| bankai777 chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Hinata is one naughty vixen.
| Sky-Rider chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
A very good one shot, but I think the next time you give us Hinata again it should be in a three-way involving Naruto/Hinata/Kurenai. That threeway is extremely rare and you've got the whole student/teacher vibe between Hinata and Kurenai to add spice to it.
| Leonineus chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Yay for OOC!Hinata!