Reviews for Love Gone Wrong
LauraKathleenB chapter 1 . 3/27/2015
Hello. This is Laura.
Well, I finally reed one of your stories and it was amazing! You have a lot of talent!
I see on your profile that you have written quite a few stories. You clearly enjoy writing and it is apparent at how spectacular you are at it!
Please, keep writing. :)
Charm chapter 4 . 10/26/2013
I like this story, you are a skilled writer.
Theshadow34 chapter 4 . 8/23/2013
This story is also awesome and the feels are that extra cheese on the perfect pizza, something I want. Keep at it bro.
NonOmnisMoriar chapter 4 . 8/23/2013
I think that this great chapter makes a fantastic ending to this story!
I really enjoyed each and every chapter!

NOM
NonOmnisMoriar chapter 3 . 8/16/2013
Ouch! I didn't expect that kind of a reaction from Muiri and neither did Bryan!
Though I can understand where she's coming from. When you give your heart to someone only to watch him/her break it, you're going to think twice before going down that road again!

NOM
NonOmnisMoriar chapter 2 . 8/12/2013
I loved the action in this chapter. Very well done.
Till recently I also thought that the court wizard was the culprit, but he really isn't!

Sorry for my late reaction, but I'm on holiday right now and it took me a while to find a wifi spot.

NOM
Zero121 chapter 2 . 8/10/2013
You have my curiosity.
NonOmnisMoriar chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
I like the story and I think that pairing the Dragonborn and Muiri up is an original and great idea.
I do have one question though: why does he agree so fast to kill two people for someone he just met and doesn't even know? And what about payment? Nothing is said about that.

But I admit that I'm very tired right now, so perhaps I missed something.

NOM