|Reviews for do you know that your love (is the sweetest sin)?|
| arwa.alzaabi chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
| yelenika chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
I LOVE this ! I don't think it's too OOC since well, Cora is a Hale, and Stiles is Stiles. I love how you managed to put feelings without being too cheesy and how the sexual scenes were not pornographic either. Perfect balance ! I do want more, but this story is so perfect within itself than I will just settle with reading another of your fictions. :) Did I tell you how much I love this ?
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
Holy. Shit. I loved this!
| GeekaZoid420 chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
OMG THAT WAS FUCKING AMAZING, THE BEST CORA/STILES FIC I'VE EVER READ. HONEST TO GOD.
God bless you.
| Juveniliare chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
I'm gonna make a crown and tagged a paper with wonky handwriting 'queen of angst' and hand it to you.
Stiles don't do normal relationship (or maybe, normal relationship doesn't do Stiles). Mom dead in his early year, Dad's probably away for the most part of the night, a single best friend for a veeeery long time, constant heartbreak around his heartthrob for years.
While Cora doesn't do relationship because she's sick of it (or dead scared of the impending results?).
I kinda feel like this fic gives me an insight on how Stiles seems to get on with fucked up kind of relationship. He probably thought that he was undeserving yet trying to savor whatever he may have. But when the tie is loose, he's heartbroken but not exactly surprised... *cue for some more angsty moment*
| DEDEBUG9 chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
ugh ugh ugh.
| CoraMartin chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Dear god, yes! Your writing is beautiful and I adore your Stora/StilesCora fics! Please write more :)
| Charlie chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
HOW DARE YOU? MY POOR STILES, WHY DO YOU KEEP BREAKING HIS HEART? LEAVE HIM BE! BUT SERIOUSLY THIS WAS STILL THE BEST! SO HEARTWRENCHING AND SADDD
now trying to be analytic here, I really like how you made loving Cora a sin because everyone who;s ever loved her (even in a friendship/family way) ends up hurt or dead. I like how in your fic, she doesn't want to be with Stiles for this specific reason. You made her unselfish and pitiful. Really, i understood her reasons for telling Stiles "don't do this". It was really powerful, even with just three words. I just felt like you captured the moment perfectly.
"He sighed then, wondering why he's never known how to get over a girl. Yet, that could be because he's never really had any reason to. It's still a strange concept to him though, how other people can leave one another behind without even a second thought. He can't really forget people in the way that they forget about him.
But then, he thinks that perhaps Lydia Martin doesn't even know him well enough to be able to forget him in the first place." THIS WAS SO SAD AND TRUE. I felt like you were giving me a look in to Stiles's head. how people really do forget him quite easily, he's not like the lacrosse superstar, popular boy, werewolf, or anything. He's just human and perfectly forgettable. So I really get what you're trying to convey. Specially how he's looking for that acceptance in Cora because he thinks she's broken like he is.
"his touch feels like whispers on her skin, like feathers and flower petals, like secrets in the night, and like something she's never ever felt before." tHIS IS BEAUTIFUL!
The last part was just too much. It made me cry. "Then, Stiles thinks that yeah, this is how it's supposed to be. Scott&Stiles, Stiles&Scott, Lydia&Aiden/Jackson, and Cora Hale just watching him from her window." this really stood out and made a lot of sense to me. Ive laways felt that if all else fails, at least the boys will still have eachother.
And let's not forget this "you caught me off-guard,
now i'm running and screaming" I found this perfect for Stiles. Since she did catch him by surprise in your story and now he's like gone insane kind of, with his mixed up feelings for her.
ANOTHER AMAZING ONE! PLEASE WRITE MORE CORASTILES AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!
| sandy chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
The world should revolve around you and your brilliance. This was brilliance at its best. You even got me to ignore the typos which is something I never do.
| warfolomei chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
You are not the only one wishing them to get together. Just because Lydia is around doesn't stop him from having a life. Recent episodes prove that he is capable of having relationships with other people.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
I like it
| Chaosgiver chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Why? You're making me cry. This was good really good, but so sad. I feel like it fits in this season of teen wolf. There is a lot of sadness and it leave you hoping the next one would be happier. Which it's not it just makes you cry more. Seriously, great writing.
| imsuchanut chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Very good. Can't wait for more!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
This is actually the best thing that I have ever read.
| X23 Maximoff chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Gah so good! I love the way you write the characters. But dear goodness I was so hoping for a happy ending, even if the sad one made more sense! Aaaaah you tore out my heart strings!