Reviews for The Fire Within
LegademaCinderheart chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
This story is so sweet, and very in character for the episode! It made my heart happy and warm. 3
TheInsaneAcrobat chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Holy amazing fanfictions! You’re so good at writing that it makes me cry. Almost. I mean, I just read (and reviewed) One Dance, and I was like, “wow she’s really good, I wonder if she has any other fanfictions.”

Well, you do. Obviously. AND THEY ARE AMAZING. I’m in the middle of Untitled right now, and I’ll definitely review that one when I’m finished because it’s pretty amazing so far!

Keep writing!

—TheInsaneAcrobat (aka a Guest)
Mystery Critic chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
U attention to detail is quite impressive, Justsumii. I was honestly surprised at how far u went to place how someone might be confused or confident into the conversation. 17.2 out of 5 stars. I'm the Mystery Critic. Keep it up, my friend.
CrazyUnicorn01 chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
This story was so good! I had butterflies in my stomach because it was so good! Please keep writing
highestcastle23 chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
this is amazing i wold love to read more