Reviews for Distant Waves
katsparkle13 chapter 6 . 9/14/2013
Don't worry, there's no need to space everything out so much. Paragraphs do just fine. Save one liners for very important sentences that leave the reader thinking, you know?
katsparkle13 chapter 4 . 9/7/2013
Besides some typos, I think you did a great job with Mara and her relationship with her grandmother. As I always say, write MORE. Always more. That way you could've described the rest of her family, too. Updates are not about time, but rather, length. Take three weeks if you have to, as long as it's over 2,000 words. Shoot for over 2,000. You can do it!
guest chapter 4 . 9/1/2013
I LOVE THIS! KEEP UPDATING! I LOVE DISTRICT TWO ESPECIALLY FATE AND I CANT WAIT FOR DISTRICT 4!