|Reviews for Emotionally Hidden|
| Moka-girl chapter 1 . 1/26
Careful, you switch tenses a lot. Keep a lookout for these verbs.
| Fragile Memories chapter 3 . 6/28/2014
Excited for when Ulrich meets Yumi!
Looking forward to reading more!
| holaminombreesdrama chapter 3 . 9/20/2013
I hope not to sound impatient or more risk crazy but I really hope, and hope, and count the seconds, about as Yumi appear, not for precionar or something, but ... PLEASE rises then the fifth chapter ... and really pleasing me this much your base to create the fic, this great, I hope you update soon, bye
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/28/2013
I'm more than a little confused. Ulrich just got his custody sones over to a military group. Doesn't matter if it's Cal who beat him up, he'd still be resentful and angry at Archie, and likely Jeremy too. It's just human nature. Ulrich certainly wouldn't be tearfully proclaiming his son-like affection to some guy he met a day ago. No one would be.
I don't want to offend: I'm sure you had your reasons, but it doesn't actually make sense.
| stealthshadow2013 chapter 3 . 8/23/2013
Good next chapter im excited to see the characters come together and there different back stories
| JustGrace13 chapter 3 . 8/20/2013
I like this idea a lot :) Keep writing!
| Corina O chapter 3 . 8/19/2013
no problem :)
| renegadestarforce chapter 3 . 8/19/2013
Jeremie usually does a return to the past does this story use the 2nd season's rule where returning to the past helps Xana?
Great story by the way.
| Theif King Akefia Bakura chapter 2 . 8/15/2013
the only thing that sometimes confuses me is whos point of view its in each time theres a page break? mabey you could put like UlrichsPOV or JeremyPOV when it comes up? other then that I loved it! cant wait for the next one!
| Nothing On Ulrich chapter 2 . 8/14/2013
I think I went a little over board on the odd and Sam thing but I hate to see a good Ulrich story tooken over by another pair. And I think you should make Ulrich more sarcastic to make the story a bit more funny
| stealthshadow2013 chapter 2 . 8/13/2013
Im very intrigued by this story so far, update soon because i am really enjoying this
| Corina O chapter 2 . 8/13/2013
good so far :)
| Bluedog197 chapter 2 . 8/13/2013
WHAT THE HECK if i didn't know any better i say he just like spirit trying to escape from the Calvary and a shock collar damn he is not an animal even then nobody should be put though that if i was him i do the same thing and try to escape at least archie is nice to him but overall great story it be cute if in the future chapters ulrich and yumi fight like they did in code lyoko so can't wait to see more
| Orangefur chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
I like the story. Plus I like Odd and Sam together. I hope you update soon.
| Corina O chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
awesome chapter :)