|Reviews for Lawfully Proposed|
| itsMrsBlack chapter 2 . 8/19/2013
Wow. WOW. Elves? Marriage law? And Sirius SURVIVED? Yesyesyes, and also more of it, please!
(Come on, you cant leave us with a cliffhanger like this!)
| treavellergirl chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
One thing that drives me up the wall for a short time is when I read that the characters are so sure that they know that their feelings are not appreciated/returned, when in almost all stories they are...and both involved use the same excuse/explanation. The thing that bothers me is that they are so sure of their opinion when they base them on nothing but their own fear. This is just an explanation to my frustration of the same argument that I have encountered again and again, it is not necessarily bad - it depends on if it moves on from that point or get stuck there the whole story (which is the norm it seems -sadly enough). Anyways, I like the different approach this idéa/story could take - I just do not wish to be reading the same argument over and over again the whole story I hope you do not take offence for my frustration, it simply is what it is and I do not mean any harm with it I wish you luck in your writing! And look forward to see if you find the path you wish to take with this story