I keep coming back to this story, this unfinished at only 4 chapters story. Because I’m in love with it and even though it hurts to be left so unfulfilled I just can’t help myself, it’s so gorgeous.
This story….this story, it just breaks my heart. Its so well written, so many steps above the rest. It’s just effing lovely. The words written so beautifully they unwrap like origami, delicate and fine crafted and full of brilliance. These characters are honed so expertly and thoroughly they’ve already come alive in the world. This fix is just gorgeous writing. And that’s why it breaks my heart, because it’s a WIP and it doesn’t look like it will ever be touched again. It’s been years since the last update. Plus, it’s a collaboration, and I already know one or both authors are on to bigger and better endeavors. The chances they’ll come back to do this little beauty justice is none to none. And my heart just broke again. Because I love what this story is already doing so far and its potential is so explosive. I wish so desperately that I could read this gem in its totality. Lots of WIPS disappoint me. But this one makes me hurt deep down.

If the authors ever come back and read this, just know…this fix is exquisite and it would be a supreme gift to see it finished.

I was hoping against hope it was only lacking the epi... I really like these two and would love to see how they figured things out.

I don't know why I did this to myself, since I know you haven't updated for 5 years, but damn I couldn't help it! Love where this is going, maybe one day you'll come back

Re-read this from start. I miss them.

Uh-oh. Why do I get the feeling he is going to explode with his feelings soon. He can hold it in forever and it might come out wrong. Great writing! Can't wait for the next update.

Great writing!

Great start! Can't wait to read more!

He's angles and precision and wanting a soft roundness that music can give to an equation. Before. And now She is light and questions and. A melody he cannot get out of his mind and she cannot admit She craves his angles. She too is immersed in this moment to protect her from the bigger maybes
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love the story. but, has it been abandoned? if so, i kinda wish you would take it down so someone (like me) wouldn't spend time reading it just to leave it like this.

Was that the end? Or has it been abandoned? Lovely in depth story. Thank you for writing.

So hooked. Loving Edward. I can feel him...

-Sigh-
I love this story. I love this world you've built for these characters. And this E & B are so unique. They feel so... different from everything else I've read, without feeling fake. I'm so thankful for this update.
I have so many questions. Neither of their personalities seem to be easy to figure out. B's restlessness... how easily she changes her train of thought. I wonder if it's something deeper. Something else that makes her that way. And my heart breaks for E. Does he have some sort of condition? Is that why having B so close feels too much for him? I don't know. I'm rambling here. I can't wait to see how these two will figure things out.
Love, Lisbeth Tejada.

I'd forgotten how much I love these two and their journey. And, of course, how much I love Ireen & Believy writing together; it's the stuff my dreams are made of. ️

I love how you've taken a seemingly ordinary premise and added such depth to it that its become extraordinary!

Thanks!