Reviews for Divergence
thomasthetmc chapter 8 . 10/18
Hope this fic gets an update
Obeyashleyk chapter 9 . 8/8
Please update! I've been looking for this story and I love the way things are headed.
SuperGuest chapter 9 . 12/6/2016
The Z-fighters will use the senzu beans right? Also why didn't Goku use Kaioken?
ShadowFFD chapter 9 . 8/6/2016
What an awesome story. I really love the development Gokus going through, in that he isn't that fearless, happy go lucky fighter anymore. He's actually scared, something we barely ever saw in DBZ. Here's to hoping you continue this someday!

And part of me can't believe that's the first time you wrote a fight scene, it was too good xD
thomasthetmc chapter 9 . 11/5/2015
I love this. I have been looking to start writing a piece myself about gokus internal struggle with his transformation but you sir just stole the show..

Slow clap ...
Maeve Sidhe chapter 9 . 8/13/2015
I am on my knees before you, o prince(ss?) of all authors, begging you, CONTINUE! This is one f'cking awesome fic, do not leave guessing how it'll end!
fatefan chapter 9 . 6/18/2015
This was really good. I am sad to see it appears to be discontinued.
invinoveri chapter 8 . 2/1/2015
Interesting premise but so far this has been boring. The idea that Goku wouldn't use his powers in the face of death is illogical. Death is terrifying, Goku should be doing everything in his power to live; that he doesn't do this makes his encounter feel flimsy and fake.
TheSkyBreakerV1 chapter 9 . 1/18/2015
So when is the next chapter coming out? This story is awesome and this is what should have happened in Dbz.
Morisako83 chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
Wow my mind was blow away. I really love this chapter. A part of me always want to see this side to Goku .So I'm happy you are write it .
FireStorm1991 chapter 9 . 6/11/2014
AW! Poor everyone! Esp poor little Gohan :/
GodzillaFollower1998 chapter 9 . 5/16/2014
Hiya, it me again! I was looking at your other stories and I happened to stumble upon this little gem, and I gotta say: this story is sick!

I've always wanted to see a flick about Goku being afraid of the power that dwelled within him, being mindful of the true creature that he was, and after reading through chapters one to nine; I can safely say that this is a fantastic story!

You played the characters beautifully, I find Goku's darker side a work of genius, and I absolutely loved the way you portrayed King Cold (he's my third favirote villain in DBZ). This chapter was depressing, sad to see Goku near dead and Vegeta in pain, but I do hope that things get better for them all; if only a bit.

I am SO adding this to my favorites, and I eagerly look forward to the next chapter.
NatNiole chapter 9 . 2/18/2014
And the plot thickens! I hope Trunks's identity remains secret, or he's in SOOO much trouble.
Perfect Carnage chapter 9 . 2/18/2014
I didn't realize Cold had done that much damage to everyone. Vegeta, Piccolo and Trunks were obvious. But the rest were surprising.

-Perfect Carnage
tomorrow4eva chapter 9 . 2/18/2014
Aw, that's a mean last line. I thought the sections were all great! Nice impending doom/change/despair vibe. Except Gohan hobbling through the hospital. If my ankle was busted and I could fly, I would be levitating. That broke my suspension of disbelief. But added to the angst. Haha.
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