Thanks for putting up the last chapters, I enjoyed the story. I know you wanted to leave it to the readers imagination but I wonder what you imagine her telling Jiraiya in the letter.

His death always gets to me even if is just the aftermath of it

This story was beautifully written but I feel like it is unfinished; where you planning on writing a chapter depicting her response to finding out about Jiraiya's demise?

oh, the helplessness...

i'm looking forward to the next chapter.

what i liked about this chapter was the silent affection between the two. not quite romance but it's there.

crit: this is a jiraiyaxtsunade fic. the scenes from the series are important, but they took up more than half of the chapter. I think you should give the two an equal amount of 'screen time' if not more :)

The action scene was imaginative and well written.

them feels...damn.

*tears*

Great start for a story. There practically no great fanfic about these two. Well done and please keep on writing

This seems like a good story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter.
(You're right, Tsunade and Jiraiya should've been canon!)