|Reviews for Avatar - Bender of the Thu'um|
| Kyubbiman chapter 11 . 12/15/2013
This is an awesome story. It is very well written and has equal parts plot, character development, and action. Please keep it up I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Alex chapter 11 . 12/7/2013
I just read all of the chapters for this and I have to say, I am blown away. This is very well written and it breathes life into familiar characters. I will have to check out some of the other things you have written, this was very entertaining. Definitely continue this, it is fantastic.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
Ok lets have a look on what drags this fic down.
The grammar is worse than decent which i can overlook.
There are some other things I dislike, but there's one in particular I just can't deal with.
Why can Mjoll use the shout 'Call dragon'? Why is she able to shout at all. It takes years to learn just on shout for someone that doesn't naturally have the Thu'um, but she just simply said 'I decided to try it out'. If it were that easy, why can't everyone use the Thu'um aswell?
As you might be able to tell I stopped reading when I read 'OD AH VIING', so I don't know anything else about the chapter or the story, but this is by all means bad first impressions. For all I know the Elder Scrolls cast is going to learn how to do bending.
So far this fic is mediocre at best.
| Brad W chapter 11 . 11/25/2013
I kind of want to see Sheogorath pop up for a chapter. He wouldn't play any important role in the story as he would more or less just decide to pop up and visit the mortal who helped stop Alduin. This would more be a showcase to Korra and whoever else about one aspect of the nature of Daedra and also a good showing of just how powerful Daedric Princes can be. Keep up the good work!
| the stone tiger chapter 11 . 11/24/2013
voice of the emperor perk ftw!
I wonder what tenzen is going to do now btw..
On the one hand.. thor seems to speak the truth about being from another world, and has no reason to lie about alduin.
on the other hand.. he DID kill of a bunch of guards.. which kind of puts a damper on things.
I can totally see korra going all like "OH mystical power! WANT TO SEE!"
Are you going to explain why the thu'um is stronger in the avatar world (does that world have a name?)?
I mean.. as far as I understand, the Thu'um is a blessing from Akatosh.. so it would seem reasonable that its stronger in the place Akatosh resides..
OR maybe akatosh is a spirit who made himself a god in tamriel? O_O /conspiracy
anyways... yet another good chapter, and keep up the great work!
| MEleeSmasher chapter 11 . 11/24/2013
Great, Roku is at play here.
| Palladius chapter 11 . 11/24/2013
| Jouaint chapter 11 . 11/24/2013
| Jouaint chapter 10 . 11/21/2013
| Madman123456 chapter 10 . 11/3/2013
Smack you around for late updates?
I might achieve the title of "supreme asshole" if i actually drove the 798 kilometers google maps says it would be from me to aarhus )
Poor dimensional travellers. You'd think traversing a body of water would be less stressful then a dimension...
| Brad W chapter 10 . 11/3/2013
Looks like we can expect a major debate/argument between Tenzin, Thor and Mjoll in the next chapter in regards to excessive force, justice, and death in the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
| the stone tiger chapter 10 . 10/29/2013
shits be getting flipped yo!
I seriously wonder what tenzen's going to do now..
on one hand.. they destroyed the police station and are thus criminals
on the other hand.. they destroyed the fully manned police station and are thus very friggin powerful..
yeah.. probably best to hear them out..
I AM JUST ACHING for the next time beifong and thor/ohdaviing/mjoll meet. I very much doubt thor will be unable to be anything else than overly cheerful.. which will grate on beifong's nerves like nothing else.
oh by the way... discontinuity alert! in a previous chapter korra was 16 (meeting ohdaviing if I remember correctly)
anyway, good chapter, and keep it up! (yay for feedback)
| MEleeSmasher chapter 10 . 10/29/2013
Ouch, that was a bloody fine start to their relationship. I hope you update soon.
| the stone tiger chapter 9 . 10/28/2013
because some-one wouldn't stop whining for a review.. (lol)
I'm pretty sure I've reviewed this before though.. hmm.. must not have gotten through..
anyway.. I doubt killing children is a crime in skyrim, seeing as it's impossible without power of the mo.. gods.
and attacking a kiddo only gives an assault charge (from what i remember) but oh well..
I am SO MUCH looking forward to when thor meets tenzen.
Tenzen: Korra, there are no such things as talking dragons or talk about foreign planes, surely this man's tale is nothing more than..
Ohdaviing: Greetings, mortal
Tenzen: Well then..
Also, how resistant is the ebony armor vs bending? and have the weapons and armors of mjoll and thor have any enchantments?
also, do you have an overview/idea of the skills thor and mjoll have?
| ltns chapter 2 . 10/12/2013
This is a very interesting concept, I would like to see where the story goes,, keep up the good work.