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![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think the baby name should be Christine Melanie O'Shea. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have a name suggestion: For a girl Ember and a boy Adrian. Anyway please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my, I hope these visitors don't cause any trouble. I'm still loving this story too :D |
![]() ![]() I really like the new group! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Chapter, can't wait til' Tuesday xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very good story! I'm excited to see what will happen next! |
![]() ![]() WHY ARE THEY SCREAMING!? ABBY WHY? I liked this chapter! I think you did a good job! Can't wait for more! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Omg luvin the story so far... And I totally am like WHY ARE THEY SCREAMING!? I NEED TO KNOW. *Heavy Breathing* Haha I'm gonna be waiting for the next chapter... |
![]() ![]() ![]() What's the screaming about?! Good girl Sunny getting braver! Poor Ian, he worries too much... Update soon! I must find out what's happening! |
![]() ![]() This chapter was great! . I agree with Wanda about a Soul being put into her baby, it would horrible; how could anyone find that good?. Ian was also awesome as always, I love the way you make him act in this story- its so him!. It was cool that you put a bit of Kyle in this chapter too (: . So any who, keep up the great work and update, update and UPDATE- please. |
![]() ![]() Not bad but got to keep a good roll. |
![]() ![]() Love it ! |
![]() ![]() Make sure you check your spelling is sunny |