Reviews for Noticing Adam: The Uprising
AdTeeFan chapter 23 . 6/1/2014
Good! Duncan is on board. Now it's time for some serious Horde butt kicking. Please don't get discouraged. There are more of us that enjoy your writing and can't wait to see what you have planned next. Don't let negative Nellie's bring you down.
Guest chapter 23 . 5/21/2014
Love the update! I feel so badly for Adora! She's finally getting the opportunity to spend time with her bro and he's with Teela or running off with Hordak! Poor girl!

I can't wait to see what happens now that MAA is on Etheria. What has Randor decided to do?
Guest chapter 23 . 5/20/2014
Great! I hope you keep writing, and keep with Adora/Adam dynamic! Love it!
Evelyn CMB chapter 23 . 5/19/2014
Based on the fact that all the stories I tend to read all referenced rude PMs as the reason for their recent lack of inspiration, I would say a troll is running about, hmmm? Don't let anyone get you down. You write wonderful stories. Thank you for sharing your gift with us!
hooked chapter 23 . 5/18/2014
As always this is a great update. I like the insight into Adora's insecurities regarding her place in the family. I like how Adam and Teela are comfortable with each other and can be honest about their thoughts/feelings. Duncan is now there to offer his help so I love the direction your story's taking!

And Foxy, you know how upset I was upon hearing that thoughtless people have sent you nasty-grams. I hope you know that there are MANY more who enjoy your stories (all of them)! Ignore the HATERS!

Ok I'm done.

Sorry for yet another rant. :-)
TeelanaFalcao chapter 23 . 5/18/2014
Lamento que você tenha recebido PMs desagradáveis. Isso está ficando frequente aqui no Fórum, infelizmente. Não dê atenção! Sua histórias são excelentes e você é um dos melhores escritores FanFiction que já vi. Você é incrível! :D :D Gosto dos sentimentos confusos de Adora. É natural que ela esteja com ciúmes de Teela, mas ela realmente está sendo injusta com a jovem Capitã da Guarda Real. Espero que as duas se entendam em breve.
Teri chapter 23 . 5/18/2014
Very glad to see an update. I am also very sorry to hear that some idiot is ruining the fun there is in writing fan fiction for you. For what it is worth, you are one of my favorite writers. I look forward to more chapters and more stories.
idstealer000 chapter 23 . 5/17/2014
Welcome back.
Classic Cowboy chapter 23 . 5/17/2014
glad to see this going again.

I've been a huge follower of this story of yours from the very beginning and I'm with you all the way through. Don't worry about naysayers, just ignore them. they just jealous. You tell a great story, and I always love seeing author alerts with your name on it. Keep up the wonderful work!
Lizphills chapter 23 . 5/17/2014
Please ignore the negative reviews I really enjoy reading many of your stories. Everyone is entailed to an review but this reviewer says please keep going
Zorra Reed chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
I got bored so I thought I’d run the first ten reviews posted by TeelanaFalcao through a translator and repost them for those who don’t read Spanish.
Chapter one: Good start. Many important people of the rebellion was captured. Teela is perfect for infiltration mission choice, although it is very dangerous. Who betrayed the rebels? Skeleton And what's up? Does he want to take Etheria since failed to Eternia? So many questions, and I look forward answers.
Chapter 2: Does Skeletor recognized Teela? Update ASAP! I am anxious to know what happens next.
Chapter 3: Adam is in trouble now. Eager to read more.
Chapter 4: Wonderful chapter! Because the spell Shadow Weaver did not work on Adam? I hope Hordak does not realize that Adam is not under the spell, he is very well disguised. It was interesting to talk to Adora and Teela. Adora is angry with her and with good reason. Thanks for the update.
Chapter 5: Hordak discovered that Adam broke the spell. I hope he can also break the second spell as he remembered the Sword of Power.
Chapter 6: This chapter was amazing. I love how skeletor is pictured here. The fic gets better. Update soon please.
Chapter 7: Oh no! Adam is now really about the spell Shadow Weaver. I hope the family of Adam and Teela can bring it back.
Chapter 8: Poor Adam! It is very confusing and maybe that's good, I mean to break the spell. My heart sank because of Marlena and Randor. They really love the child and made a misinterpretation of the words of the Witch. Ah, I was sure it would be Randor who would go to Etheria. (laughs)
Chapter 9: I love you're writing about with Adora and Teela and little friction between them. You can even feel. Poor poor Adam and Teela. I loved it!
Chapter 10: Poor adam, things are not easy for him. Repressed memories? This was very good! Shadow Weaver is pretty savvy I must admit. Sometimes I think Adam will get rid of the spell alone, but unfortunately he can not. Maybe when he sees Randor, Adora and Teela Prince can break free of the spell. I wonder what's up ... Skeletor.
Henrique Fabray1 chapter 22 . 2/3/2014
I'm loving this sequence. :)
TeelanaFalcao chapter 22 . 2/1/2014
Acho que Duncan tem razão. Tudo que aconteceu com Adam certamente servirá para amadurecê-lo mais. Afinal ele será o rei um dia! Gosto como Adam percebe a manipulação de Teela, mas mesmo assim ele continua.
hooked chapter 22 . 1/31/2014
Heh heh...Adam recognized the manipulation! But glad Teela owned up to it. Also like how it still worked lol. Good job Teela. Duncan and Randor's conversation about war and the right thing to do/not to do was on point. Great work!
AdTeeFan chapter 21 . 1/19/2014
Loved Teela's actions. Adam is too smart and knows her too well to fall for it though. I hope he stays anyway, it will be good for both of them. I also wonder what Randor and Duncan have planned. Whatever it is, I hope it works even just a little.
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