Reviews for Phoenix
RhondaLara chapter 3 . 8/10/2014
Really Great!
Guest chapter 3 . 3/5/2014
Wonderful story. Good characterization. Brilliant job. :)
DensiLand chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
Very nicely done! Love getting into Deeks' mind post-torture. I had the please of meeting Mel at the Fan Meet; yes, she's wonderful!
bunnyslots chapter 3 . 10/19/2013
Just Perfect!
Browncoats and Floral Bonnets chapter 3 . 9/22/2013
Okay, I will be totally honest with you, I read the synopsis and wasn't sure I wanted to read the story. I tend to be pretty skeptical when it comes to people's interpretations of how canon things are going to play out.
So believe me when I say this blew me away. Holy crap. Everything about it was just.../right/. I feel like you portrayed the characters very realistically and honestly. The story itself was written beautifully, and I found it really believable. Fantastic job!
Guest chapter 3 . 9/19/2013
I love this ending. I think it comes around in the perfect way, and it offers a different point of view of Deeks and Kensi and also of Sam and what he's going through. Nobody is quite as perceptive as Hetty and she's a wonderful character to bring balance to this story. You did an amazing job with this story and I would love to see something like this become reality on the show.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/15/2013
This was just amazing.
miss-tarletone chapter 3 . 9/15/2013
I really enjoyed this ending! I like that you didn't do anything sappy and fluffy, because that's probably not what would happen in real life. I enjoyed that this was realistic. Wonderful chapter!
lynneanne chapter 3 . 9/13/2013
Amazingly written. And while I think you did a great job on especially Sam and Deeks, Hetty's voice in the story was simply perfect! :) thanks so much for posting this
Guest chapter 2 . 9/12/2013
Ok...I'm convinced you write for the show. Your words are very true to the characters, especially Hetty. Fantastic story!
TMVH50 chapter 3 . 9/12/2013
I just found this story and I must say that you did an amazing job with it. I think we could see something very similar to this on the actual show. I am ridiculously happy that we are just a couple of weeks away from seeing how the writers resolve the cliffhanger. Thanks so much for sharing your ideas!
Reader1976 chapter 3 . 9/12/2013
A Phoenix rises from the ashes. Fantastic imagery. I love Hetty and her conversation with Sam made for a perfect 3rd chapter. Closure on all fronts. Excellent dialogue. What a lovely story. Bravo!
ToOldToShip chapter 3 . 9/11/2013
What an amazing story. Your words are so true to character.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/11/2013
Amazing you have Hetty down well I have seen very few who can write her. You nailed her character ans your dialogue is outstanding
BlueTigress chapter 3 . 9/11/2013
Wow, amazing story! I really hope the writers are going to play it out just like you! Shot straight to my fav!
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