Reviews for Iron Hearts: The Shanxi Campaign
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2021
yeah two things that made me drop this story before i even finished the first chapter:
one ... too much united stats crap
two ... a humanity that has to deal with piracy in space means they are unable to even control the ability to build ftl ships which means whoever is in control of humanity at this time is incredibly incompetent

i'm not really interested in reading about all the things people screw up
Hugo Bevroun chapter 17 . 7/24/2021
Nice story but ohmygod this google translate russian...
Manatheron chapter 18 . 5/12/2021
With how much I've loved your other works I'm kind of surprised it's taking me this long to read this one... And now I'm incredibly disappointed that it's not finished. :-p

Real life comes first, I get that. If the story is dead I wouldn't mind a cliff note version of how it would have ended though. If you don't mind anyway.

Best of luck
~Manatheron
LincolnRonnie94 chapter 16 . 2/17/2021
Starship trooper
Ruan Sueidyson chapter 7 . 6/22/2020
G
MystiYew chapter 18 . 12/5/2019
A shame there's no more.
Just a Crazy-Man chapter 1 . 10/29/2019
Cool.
Guest chapter 18 . 8/30/2019
Will there be a chapter 19 and if so when can we expect it to be out? I have read this story multiple times and constantly checked it to see if there were any more chapters. I have really enjoyed this story so far and I hope you continue it.
radindusan2 chapter 18 . 9/17/2018
Grat story,when is the next instalment? I greatly enjoy your ass-rape od Desolus...
ocstek chapter 18 . 9/6/2018
Shame. Another great fanfic that bit the dust :'(
Strato1 chapter 1 . 7/31/2018
I've only read the first chapter, and I plan to read more since I like these kinds of stories. However, I've seen several plot holes so far. How is the quarian ship able to display video transmissions from an alien ship with completely unknown computer systems and video formats? When were the Quarians invited to land a shuttle on the human ship (since it would be suicide to do so without being invited)? Why are the turians acting like morons? Is it really practical for a ship to carry around 200 ton slugs for its cannon? Why wouldn't humans at least be aware of the basic uses of element zero, since they clearly know it is an integral part of advanced alien technologies and would have realistically invested some time and resources for research? And these are just the more obvious ones I've noticed...
Eu sou um fa chapter 18 . 7/4/2018
loved it,
Ilireanwri chapter 18 . 7/3/2018
This story is interesting. Very interesting. Are you still continuing it? I really hope you do, because it just begins to get really exciting. I'm curious to see how the rest of Citadelspace react once they learn what happened on Shanxi.
Captiosus chapter 18 . 4/6/2018
This has been a very nice read so far, looking forwards to seeing the next chapter.
Captiosus chapter 14 . 4/6/2018
NOT THE TWINKIE!
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