Yep. Fucking get this Mary sue of s liability of that captain chair AT ONCE! Dear fucking lord. So emotionally unhinged. So what if your son is in danger? He signed up just like the rest of his comrades and at this very moment he isn't your responsibility. For fuck sake, someone slap that bitch some sense please!

Ahhh... Why the fuck are politicians getting in the way in military affairs for fuck sake!

So melodramatic.

Was element zero ever a fuel source? I thought it was a mass manipulating super conductor

Great story,i love it whhen Turians get ass raped :when is next instalement? Pretty please with tit on top!

The only thing that bothers me is how long it’s taking earth backup to arrive.

I have been going through a contact war kick lately. I just found this story and I know its been a while since it updates so I hope this finds you. I love it! The alterations of the mass effect world are fun, fascinating, and fit right into the canon lore enough for me to be happy. The story is engaging and exciting and I was bummed to realize it hasn’t been completed. I thoroughly enjoyed my read! I hope you are doing well and i’ll hold out hope for an update!

yeah two things that made me drop this story before i even finished the first chapter:
one ... too much united stats crap
two ... a humanity that has to deal with piracy in space means they are unable to even control the ability to build ftl ships which means whoever is in control of humanity at this time is incredibly incompetent

i'm not really interested in reading about all the things people screw up

Nice story but ohmygod this google translate russian...

With how much I've loved your other works I'm kind of surprised it's taking me this long to read this one... And now I'm incredibly disappointed that it's not finished. :-p

Real life comes first, I get that. If the story is dead I wouldn't mind a cliff note version of how it would have ended though. If you don't mind anyway.

Best of luck
~Manatheron

Starship trooper

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A shame there's no more.

Cool.

Will there be a chapter 19 and if so when can we expect it to be out? I have read this story multiple times and constantly checked it to see if there were any more chapters. I have really enjoyed this story so far and I hope you continue it.