Reviews for Oh, How the Mighty Fall in Love
carleesimotherofcats chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
Loved it! It was very well written, as well and very interesting!
MissesHermioneMalfoy chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
cklls chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
Nicely done. One suggestion: synonyms are your friend. You use the word "smell" several times in quick succession. Try varying the mood and tone with words like aroma, scent, perfume, etc. It adds richness to your writing rather than using the same word repeatedly.
bb chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
could you do a story where draco cheats on hermione and hermione finds out so she kicks him out and gradually they start to reconcile and come back together,
BWBeeDubs chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
This was great! A little confusing at parts (mainly during the big argument scene) but it didn't take long to catch up to what was going on. I really enjoyed reading this! Please continue with your writing!

M7007 chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Absolutely lovely and with a happy ending! Yay!
BookwormGirl97 chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
I loved it! Great! :)
Addgjlvvdnmkdf chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
I really like this!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Love it!