|Reviews for Surrender Your Heart, Capture My Soul|
| WascallyWabbit chapter 28 . 3/5
I'm a bit embarrassed to say that I started to cry when France talked about Holy Rome and Joan of Arc. But that just means you did a great job on this story!
| kitty chapter 1 . 3/4
Well you kinda messed up on Germany and Austria's accents, they are German after all. I suggest that you watch the anime, the english dub is best cuz it distinguishes the different accents better. But that's just my opinion, whatever works best for you. Oh and you had a lot of mistakes with the grammar. Capitalization, punctuation, and a few spelling errors but other than that, good job. 8)
| rainbowdashie8 chapter 28 . 2/14
I loveeeee thissss sooo muchhhhhh it ended so well although I was secretly hoping for more PruCan... This is an awesome story! Just read back over it because there are grammatical and spelling errors occasionally but it's still really awesome!
| Monipue chapter 12 . 1/29
I loved it, but would ya please tell me what happened to Russia? I feel so bad that i didn't get it and that he didn't get love - please answer a prayer of af girl who wants to know :-)
| totyd chapter 28 . 1/27
... thus story has made my life.. I swear. Its the best Hetalia fanfic I have EVER read. Ahh. I'm in love. The lemon scene was written well! Ohmygod. I wish I could have seen Prussia and Canada in action (; mmm
| piratespain13 chapter 28 . 1/13
OMG! That was close to Prussia awsome. I absolutely loved this story. You had my three OTP's and most of my Armada of ships as my friends call it.
| TaliaLion234 chapter 28 . 1/7
ohmigod let me start off by saying this was amazing. utterly amazing. you have grammar and typos, but those are fixable. i'm not really an angsty person (well, i myself am but don't like it in my fanfiction), so i was hesitant to read the angsty parts, but you did such a great job with it i didn't mind. i felt britain's pain, felt prussia and canada's loneliness, italy's confusion, and germany's anguish. it takes serious skill for that to happen. so bravo, congrats, and please, encore. continue your work.
and i'm doing this mobile, so i'm too lazy for capitalization, lol.
please, if you don't already have one, i would very much enjoy beta-ing for you. 'twould be an honor.
keep up your writing, darlin'!
| MagicaLunaTica chapter 28 . 12/31/2013
I made the wworst fucking mistake...i loved this way more than I intended...My...heart is ...afskjhsksisncjahiaba ...I fell in love once again...
| 12KataangHeart's chapter 28 . 12/26/2013
I remeber when there were only a few chapters on this, I would wake up reading it and fall asleep reading it, only to redo the process. After the conflict with Russia I neglected to finish reading this because of finals in school and because I thought I would cry. This was beautiful and I really didn't want to see the day it would end. You would update faster then I could read some times. And this I can say with a full heart, that was one of the best fanfictions I've ever read, the few errors made me realize how wonderful people could write, reminding me you were a human being. Because the way the characters where so in character...it was amazing and I was left speechless. The ending was all I ever hoped would happen in the beginning, Italy find out about Germany being Holy Rome. Sorry for never reviewing, but being caught in your story all I could ever do was press the next button. You are amazing thank you for this amazing experience I hope to enjoy your amazing storys more often, really, I can't explain how amazing this was and everything was just absolutely perfect
with a happy heart
p.s. I really am sorry about not reviewing before, please forgive me, you're awesome
| yaoi-lover-omfg chapter 6 . 12/24/2013
can you please stope going to 1st tence to 2nd tence to 3rd tence. its really starting to get annoying. you have got a good plot but you need to work on grammer. sorry if this seems harsh. and im trying not to. im much better at reading than writing but... please try to fiix the grammer. but the spelling is great! and i love the plot as well.
| Shearfang chapter 28 . 12/23/2013
Oh my gursh! I loved it that was so cute and awesome not as awesome as Prussia ,but still awesome. An I will love you forever if you made a sequel to this. Because its so awesome.
| vampireanna'dancer chapter 28 . 12/23/2013
WOAH! Words can not the describe the epic-ness of what I just read! You, my friend, are a true genius! For never writing yaoi lemon before you did incredible! It really seemed like the characters were alive throughout the whole story :) your descriptions were beautiful and your references to the original series were well placed. Going to check what other stories you have up now but I hope you continue writing ones like the masterpiece that is his story. Incredible!
| FullmetalAlchemist64 chapter 28 . 12/22/2013
That was... the single greatest piece of literature that I have ever read in my life. It was able to thouroghly distract me from the CHOCOLATE I was eating. I think it's melted now from the sheer hotness of this fanfic. Edgar Allan Poe and Shakespeare have NOTHING on you, my friend. You are a fucking yaoi GOD.
*dies in puddle of rainbows*
| Erin Kamikaze chapter 28 . 12/19/2013
That was a really good story! Please write more fanfiction :D
| Treebrooke chapter 28 . 12/18/2013
IT WAS AWESOME! I LOVED IT!