|Reviews for Fate's Gamble|
| XInsanityXGuiltechXShadowwindX chapter 59 . 2/22
Halfway through her description I figured out who she was. Damn I got deeper into the Nasuverse than I thought...
I think Harry just became a father though.
| XInsanityXGuiltechXShadowwindX chapter 58 . 2/22
Tamamo no Mae... Dammit, that's my Nasuverse Waifu!
| ericitouch2010 chapter 68 . 2/6
Chapter 68 its one of the best stories ive read and this is coming from a guy who reads like a guy in the desert drinks water.
| LuluViBritania chapter 70 . 1/28
he has third true magic. even before that he has shown an ability to grab souls and store them in glass balls which he could have done before she fully died before gaining 3rd and simply stopped it leaving when she died after gaining 3rd. and why doesnt he ditch his current body and rebuild a new one with #rd
| LuluViBritania chapter 19 . 1/25
Yer while i am not discounting Franks monster missing it Lancer would not have under any circumstance missed Lucius adding an extra book into Ginnys books and she was watching the highly suspicious man closely the fact that she missed this for the sake of plot is ridiculous you should have instead have had them hear about the squabble between the 2 but not actually seen it or had Lancer doing or being distracted by something else
| LuluViBritania chapter 14 . 1/24
[A regular student would have been worried about being shut out of the castle when the doors were shut but, if it came to it, Harry was perfectly capable of walking up the side of the wall and
finding an open window to climb in and, failing that, he could always enter through the battlements or towers.] He wouldn't even have to climb a tower he could just Kaleidoscope inside
| Azaira chapter 88 . 1/22
This! Is! Too! Bloody! Long!
...Yet, I just couldn't stop reading.
Thank you for the wonderful story.
| mc.zero chapter 88 . 1/22
First of all... amazing fic, I really enjoyed it.
But I can't deny that there were a couple of vices you showed that were irksome at best...
-You made way too many recaps... I mean, I get it that most of the times you were trying to express someone's opinion on Harry's action but... there were way too many for my liking.
-Quite a lot of times you wrote 'detailed' descriptions (3 parragraphs perhaps?) about redundant stuff... a lot of those were regarding spells or other weaponry that he never really got to use, so I don't even get why you bothered give it so much detail. And the one time that I really got pissed off was while reading on your 'fake' servant's disguises... I think you described each 'fake' at least 3 times while at HW but then you barely gave me a glimpse of them when they actually used them during the Grail War! xD
Tbh... after ch20 I started skipping whenever you went down the memory lane or with spell specs, but the story as a whole was an amazing work nonetheless!
I'm coming right after your sequel now o.o :3
| Smh chapter 1 . 1/18
the height of self insert wank fantasy
everything wrong with ffn
| Azaira chapter 39 . 1/18
Dumbledore could call fawkes to heal Harry?
| Azaira chapter 34 . 1/17
Why can't they just destroy the contracts..?
| KeyofSolomon.M.E chapter 25 . 1/17
I love this story im re reading it for like the 3rd time now... and still i cant understand what the hell that medallion is T_T pls send help
| Azaira chapter 22 . 1/16
I thought Harry took Zelretchs words seriously? Besides that, he has the forest personified asking a favor of him. He's had six weeks here, and it seems like he's more interested in playing around than making sure nothing dangerous could creep up on him. 6 weeks and he still hasn't gone to that bathroom to analyze.
I'll attribute that to his age. But, yea... It just feels weird and contradictory to his character.
You might could change the venom extraction to gathering their venom sacks, and include gathering the silk gland too. With their size, each spider probably has enough liquid silk to produce multiple outfits.
| narukyu1 chapter 3 . 1/14
Everything I know about Nasuverse comes from fanfics, so I never really understood how bs the Kaleidoscope and Zelretch really is. These chapters have enlightened me to this fact. Synchronizing with alternate selves to understand languages...
| righello di tutti chapter 1 . 1/6
Have I told you how much of a great author you are?