Reviews for Fate's Gamble
vparadox12122000 chapter 9 . 8/29/2022
The thing about the nasuverse is that around a year from when this story was made magical girls were added into the series.

All in all nice work on the story dude.
AlexanderTheGrey chapter 10 . 7/19/2022
Malfoy using all those really advanced spells is too much.
matheusdapoia chapter 73 . 7/19/2022
harry just do what the others told him to do
Ophis-The-Infinite-Dragon-God chapter 39 . 7/19/2022
So much for his perfect memory, Snape told him about Sirius already.
Ophis-The-Infinite-Dragon-God chapter 37 . 7/19/2022
I really wish this story did not include that aggravating aspect that Shiro has with this stories Harry, the broken completely uninterested and unable to feel lust and only a warped sense of love is pretty damning for a story like this where girls are thrown at the guy.
Ophis-The-Infinite-Dragon-God chapter 3 . 7/18/2022
I absolutely love this novel, I've been looking for a good fanfic that's not constantly dark and edgy for a while and this one seems utterly perfect; I'd like to sincerely thank you for writing this.
Apollo D'Arc chapter 88 . 6/24/2022
I believe you wrote a good story.
Apollo D'Arc chapter 88 . 6/24/2022
I believe you wrote a good story.
Creativenameok chapter 24 . 5/28/2022
I was going to say that you might want to make an AN warning about Liz’s real life but you kinda covered that with the contents of the chapter, so I guess I’ll say I just wasn’t expecting it at all, but I like the choice you made
SonicAnime2010 chapter 6 . 5/26/2022
"I believe that magic is magic. The purpose of the magic determines whether it is benign or malevolent to me and not a label." Spoken like a true Kyle Katarn'er here.. and absolutely correct too
Arturia LeFay chapter 85 . 5/13/2022
sexual tension? ha! Alaya is pent up!
Arturia LeFay chapter 83 . 5/13/2022
I truly like the meaning of the italicized 'if' in the beginning.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/5/2022
Hahaha what a bunch of nonsense xD wtf is it with all this preaching.. Dropped and gutted
Astramilitarum01 chapter 88 . 5/3/2022
All in all it's a good story and for the most part i enjoyed it even as a non Fate series Fan, but the amount of random encounters, stuff that make no logic sense and the amount of odds that get stacked against Harry at times make little sense at best and at worst are over dramatic crap.

I understand that you wanted to " Balance" this Harry against the odds but at some point i just thought, why even bother anymore, like in a Chinese story crap happens one after an other.

So yeah the story is good, but at times a had to disengage my brain to keep going because some actions are so senseless or out of character that they nearly break the story
Reading4Books chapter 9 . 4/23/2022
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