Reviews for Fate's Gamble
Argonaut986 chapter 46 . 3/22
Well… that’s OP!
Evongalion chapter 26 . 3/22
Like the story so far but a few things stick out harry claims to be a monster but is putting up with stuff from people he has no reason to take. Why is he trying to help malfoy during his prank why tolerate ron malfoy lockhart or dumbledor. Him becoming a trap and the merge with hogwart changing his form into a woman doesnt make sense and him crossressing like a trap is pointless and kinda cringy. I feel like this reconciliation with he headmaster feel rushed and has no real substance and after a few words to at that. would any real person forgive/accept the stuff he pulled in harrys life and be on semi friendly terms no. if harry is gonna claim to be a monster let him show that aspect to those in his way. besides that everything else is pretty good just needs some better dialogcharacter dev.
Argonaut986 chapter 45 . 3/22
That could be problematic…
Argonaut986 chapter 44 . 3/21
Well… that was unexpected…
Argonaut986 chapter 43 . 3/21
That thought was a challenge to the universe…
Argonaut986 chapter 42 . 3/21
That could’ve ended very differently…
Argonaut986 chapter 41 . 3/21
The dementors are DOOMED!
Argonaut986 chapter 40 . 3/20
That was interesting…
Argonaut986 chapter 39 . 3/20
Well, that was an entertaining…
Argonaut986 chapter 38 . 3/20
That was impressive…
Argonaut986 chapter 37 . 3/20
Aqua is going to be happy?
Argonaut986 chapter 36 . 3/19
That’s going to be entertaining…
Argonaut986 chapter 35 . 3/19
Narcissa is a smart woman…
Argonaut986 chapter 34 . 3/19
That. Was. BRUTAL! And AWESOME!
Argonaut986 chapter 33 . 3/19
Ferret senior is in for EXTREMELY unpleasant surprises…
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