Reviews for I Sing the Body Electric |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very cool start to a story. I truly hope you finish it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I come back sometimes to read this story cause I love it, and it's well written :) (it's a shame only one reviews allowed per chapter) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep me interested. Please keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. You've managed to create your own world and story line and at the same time translate the plot and character of Soul Eater into it. A sort of perfect meld where the canon is still recognizable but it is still very much your story. I like how well the world of computer systems, a sort of cyperpunk sci fi, fits with the original. Both canon Soul Eater and "I sing the Body Electric" have a slightly surreal quality to them. And the way you took the names like Soul, Stein or Meister and made them your own is so very clever. There is also a feeling of unreality running through out like Maka's feelings for Soul and the way she has to remind herself that he is not human. And Soul himself, such a complicated character, almost fragile and childlike in some ways and mature in others. Great story, such an original take on Soul Eater and fascinating intricate relationships between characters. I do hope this story will some day be finished because you do have the beginning of something amazing here. |
![]() ![]() This thing is wonderful and really creative it looks like you haven't posted in a while. If you don't plan on updating please find someone to finish the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update please |
![]() ![]() I've really enjoyed reading the story. I think it's cool how you used canon details, but had AU explanations for them - like, Soul being protective because he's a security program, and the characters' names being acronyms. It's an interesting AU, too. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next! |
![]() ![]() That was awesome I can't wait 'till you post more |
![]() ![]() ![]() *applause* I have never read a story like this but its amazing waiting for the next update! (: |
![]() ![]() This story is so good i cant even handle it |
![]() ![]() just found this fic and i am looooving it so far! hope you're still updating |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ermergoodness this rocks! I can't wait u til the next chapter! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS STORY IS INCREDIBLE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your writing always gives me these feels because the way you describe and what adjectives you use so greatly affect your story and certain things just resonate with me (i.e. Stein's slippery code). My knowledge of how computers work isn't that advanced but even if I knew nothing, it would be like if you were articulating it perfectly if it were all physically right in front of me without being redundant and that storytelling is a gift. (Also the little soma snark and quips make me feel all fuzzy inside) Awesome chapter! |