Reviews for Mingle
Lovetoday2012 chapter 1 . 10/25/2016
This whole story I felt so bad for Arthur, having his ambitions and desires taken away from him. They were literally taken by others and even more frightening, his own wants were being squeezed out of him by instinct. It was interesting how when he was put down, it was logically correct but so intrinsically wrong at once. Like Alfred, he was a total asshole but his behavior was socially and instinctually correct. Although Arthur was starting to submit to his instincts and recognize the way it soothed his omega nature, my heart was breaking for him. He was so strong and society literally stomped out what made him, HIM. I thought that was how it would end, and Resigned myself to a bittersweet ending albeit more bitter than sweet. The second to last paragraph was the GREATESt conclusion I could have hoped for, and really made me appreciate the whole story all the more. That end is what compelled me to write a response, as Arthur did the best/only thing he could do to save himself. His victory was touching, meaningful, and encouraging.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2016
Dude you're fucked up, never change
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2016
haahaah
cha cha real smooth chapter 1 . 7/25/2016
Dude this needs a sequel! I NEED A SEQUEL! MY BODY WON'T LIVE WITHOUT A SEQUEL HNGG
magiclaud chapter 1 . 7/10/2016
PERFECT! :D
watergerl01 chapter 1 . 7/5/2016
That was one of the best omegaverse stories I have ever read.
LilyClare chapter 1 . 5/12/2016
Please make a sequel, don't leave us hanging like that ;A;
evane chapter 1 . 5/5/2016
I am specheless...
pamepenguinbooks chapter 1 . 4/29/2016
I LOVE IT
SadButSmiling chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
WHAT THAT WAS AMAZING. PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL IT WAS GORGEOUS THANK YOU
flyneza chapter 1 . 3/6/2016
IS THAT A CLIFFHANGER?! WHAT? WHERE IS THE SEQUEL?! WHERE IS IT?!
Jill1354 chapter 1 . 1/10/2016
Please for the love of god continue! Please Please Please Please Please Please Please!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2015
*pops up randomly* soooooooooooooo...I heard there was a possibility of a sequel...
fwijfeepegoeg chapter 1 . 11/13/2015
Sequel? *makes hopeful puppy dog face*
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2015
You're a good writer. Your narration was executed well and the you kept an In depth running description going. In all honesty I probably won't read the sequel but that's only because the story, though well written, didn't sit well with me; each to their own. I'm quite picky about Omegaverse to begin with and this story just happened to overstep my preference for such an AU.
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