Reviews for Captured |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So I started reading this story again and forgot it was never finished fml! Anyways I still love this fic and your others |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is beautifully written! Thank you for sharing this fic and it truly is magnificent. Although it is very dark abd sinister at times, the gentle moments make it all the more worthwhile! I'm looking forward to reading your other fics. |
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![]() ![]() Omg this made me cryyyyyyyy! Now my eyes hurt! Xxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() This whole story has turned out great. And your description of Maleficent is spot-on-it's exactly how she appears to those who know her... if you know what I mean. "Dragon-like" strength; eyes that start off normal; then become completely green-with no distinct pupil or iris-then her eyes start glowing with pure power, and when they shift to being reptile's eyes... You're in deep trouble if she happens to be looking at you. For after that; her anger consumes her, and she makes her full transformation. It's not just her strength or her eyes which are that of a Dragon... Her whole body, soul, and mind become that of a Dragon. And it's that part; the part where her ferocity is equal to that of the Drakes of old... That is what attracts me. In fact; she does exist IRL, in her Draconic form. And SHE is no outcast-she is Draconic Royalty; a princess. She's also my little sister. And I was once a Prince-the eldest child of a rather famous Draconic video game star-and as the eldest child; I was the Crown Prince, first in line for the throne of the Kingdom of Dragons. After my father perished in battle; I became King. My younger sister, Maleficent; stayed as she was-a member of Royalty, yet not a Queen. (As she was younger, this does fit.) As strange as this may sound; unless you are deliberately aggressive towards her, she is rather pleasant to be around... once you get to know her, of course. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dhcdknxddxdxvfdifgnkiddh. I would have thought that emma would emotionally distance herself from Regina for the betrayal or give her the silent treatment and have Regina feel hurt or rejected but I guess I was wrong lol xD Ouch... They don't have indoor pluming there? Dx I love this fic! Hope to read more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a good chapter! Can't wait to see how the relationship develops! Your such a good writer! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() omfg please please continue! I'm begging you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh God! Pleeeeeease continue with the story. I'm like dying for an update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's so beautiful when Regina calls Emma "pet". Hot as fuck. Your story is brilliant! There are so many possibilities that I can't hardly wait. I hope it to be a long story with lots of chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so excited with this story. I just couldn't stop reading it! It's the most powerful thing I've ever read. Can't even write properly right now. I hope you update this soon. Thank you very much for this magnificent piece of work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting Chapter! Looking forward to reading the next! |