|Reviews for Their First Kiss|
| Sarah Faith chapter 1 . 12/28/2015
This is adorable! I ship MakoHaru!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2015
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2015
I've read this at least five times by now. GODDAMMIT AERO IT IS SO GOOD BKFWVLHAFLHAFLHAFLAVFLBAFLAHD
| Mistress of Modern Mythology chapter 1 . 12/26/2014
Like Rei would say: BEAUTIFUL!
| Athina Blaine chapter 1 . 12/12/2014
The way the episode SHOULD have gone, to be sure. So cute...!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/16/2014
"You'll never find, as long as you live
Someone who loves you tender like I do" 3
| RoaringBacon chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
Its really very sweet. Its simple but enough to make my day
| kiara chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Love it -
| Beth Catherine chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
This is so lovely. It's also really nicely written.
| INACTIVEFOREVEREVER chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
I thought Mako-chan was going to die! But im sooo happy he didn't! TwT It went from sadness to sweet!
| blueberry709 chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
this was amazingly sweet and everyone's characterisation was perfect!
| Caro-Kitty chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
This was just darling. Poor emotionally awkward Haru :)
| absababs chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
OH MY GODDDDD. Your characterization was perfect! I'm crying oh my god seriously this was amazing.
| dingcs chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
I saw the picture before I read this, and I thought to myself, "Well damn, someone should write about this!" And bam, I found this wonderful story. Really, it was very cute and very beautifully written. I couldn't ask for anything better.
I've always favored the Makoto/Haru pairing because it's pretty obvious that Makoto is the only person Haru would put water aside for, and it's great. This story is what I needed. Great job!
"I can make you mackerel." I just. Yes, Haru, you really know how to contribute. lol
| Water Fairy a.k.a. Mizu chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
adfhkjsahfasfkjashfjskdfj ;w; So beautiful. Thank you so much for writing this.