|Reviews for Victory|
| Velasa chapter 2 . 9/12/2013
I like how everything isn't all hunky-dory here- Shepard's physically ok but mentally and emotionally a mess. Garrus is doing better but he's stuck in a role he really doesn't care for and isn't really equipped for. And the first opportunity that comes up isn't just magically handed over to her! it's realistic, I like it.
The meeting with Zaeed was great too- the things he said were horridly un-PC but very much in character for him. It wasn't meant cruely, he just thinks she'd be -happier- dead.
I'll be keeping an eye on this!
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/10/2013
Great chapter, you are great at writing the characters! As for your question of to go the sad route or the happy one, why not try both? You could separate the sad and the happy version into two stories! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| PandaPez chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
This was brilliant! You did such an amazing job writing Zaeed. And I loved the way you handled Shepard and her conflicting emotions, especially how she was still torn at the end. Very realistic and well written : )
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
Very good so far, can't wait for the next chapter!