Reviews for Time's Fool
irononmaiden chapter 18 . 3/14
What a fantastic story! It really sucked me in. I actually feel a bit raw after binge-reading it all day—very touching.
jlynnross394 chapter 18 . 2/28
Ilysm omg i just stayed up til 1 to finish this even tho i have to work in the morning and idec it was definitely worth it!
Fifitheflowertot chapter 18 . 2/6
Why doesn't this fic have more reviews? It's brilliant! I was hooked from the start - plus all the places they went to were really interesting. :D x
kindaof1 chapter 18 . 1/26
Oh God this was good. So very good. Lost track of the time i got absolutely swept away in it. WELL done you.
Assasin Nero chapter 18 . 1/23
Assasin Nero chapter 17 . 1/23
the story was good. I think the changesthey did t each other stayed and the chanhes by outside sources were discarded ..
Assasin Nero chapter 16 . 1/23
nice chap.
Assasin Nero chapter 15 . 1/23
I admit I am distracted with the pregnancy... ok chap.
Assasin Nero chapter 14 . 1/23
the prgnancy is really a major inconsistancy... after the friars, sev was healed, after the slave ship, hermione was no longer faminished... rest was a-okay.
Assasin Nero chapter 13 . 1/23
but you stated that she was brutally violated and she had no after effects in the next timeline.. also her caring about this child when she apparently left her baby that she birthed is kinda hypocitical
Assasin Nero chapter 12 . 1/23
xD people complained about it? lol.. that mustve been awkward :P

I feel really sorry for the sheep.
The next timeline will definitely be a nightmare for them
Assasin Nero chapter 11 . 1/23
the setttings are all deally good. At last, they acnowledged their feeling. Though there's still room to improve, very much so, in fact
Assasin Nero chapter 10 . 1/23
you painted a clear, grim picture of what mustve happened at the btime/b. This was a good chapter. :)
Assasin Nero chapter 9 . 1/23
you granted me my wish :).. great chap
Assasin Nero chapter 8 . 1/23
walter sickened me. I dont know, but are guys like walter the norm?

Bombay? Stifling heat? xD england must be really cold.. I find bimbay's climate qjite moderate (and many a time quite humid)..

nice chapter.. I personally think it would've been nice if you showed their elopement, from walter :P.. Pretty exciting..
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