Reviews for Harry Potter: King of the Amazons |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, i have decided. This story is bot for me. I am just too uncomfortable with an 8 year old marrying and having kids and all those women seeing nothing wrong with it. I think what they do is just a different way of child abuse. And the age gap (women 40 and the male between 8 and 11) is off putting too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looks like the amazon hunters are as uncomfortable about 11 year old harry marrying as an 8 year old and having kids immediately. I don’t get why everyone is just so, hey a prophecy, sure let’s do rituals, marry, marry a kid, have sex with said kid… If i was an amazon I’d probably leave that society to join another without child marriages :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am a little uncomfortable with the fact that harry was made an adult with a ritual but is technically still only 11. you switched into first person once in this chapter and if you ever edit stories (i know some authors do while others don’t) i suggest some proofreading. I am not a native speaker so i get sometimes thrown out of the story by things like f. e. read hair. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congratulations, well done in completing the story. Far too many fail to do so. Kudos. |
![]() ![]() ![]() harem its just not my thing |
![]() ![]() ![]() harem |
![]() ![]() ![]() im confused andromeda’s husband wasnt a death eater and she didnt hate him nor was it an arranged marriage |
![]() ![]() ![]() And thus began a new era… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well… that happened… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well… that’s going to be good for Amelia Bones… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well… that’s one way to do that… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Moldyshorts shouldn’t have done that… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well… that’s going to be interesting… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well… that was a deus ex machina from Harry… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bumbledork is doomed… |