Reviews for Life of the Independent |
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![]() ![]() ![]() update please |
![]() ![]() Look here nigger, I don't like your story. Obviously, your mind is full of black man's ideas to write your story that way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I am only fourteen years old and I shouldn't have to handle these sorts of issues." Hate to break it to him but you can't have it both ways. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds like you made Harry out to be like Sirius and I admit he had a bad role model. But jeez it is not cool for a 4th year to be banging 7th years. and bragging about it, that's even worse. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wait a minute - you said Harry had been with a few girls at school? at age 14? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found your story and utterly devoured it! Can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that is wonderful, please complete new chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this story and I look forward to reading more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was hoping they would go to America... |
![]() ![]() ![]() That should have totally freaked him out! It's hard to picture a 9 year old being so calm and unflappable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry but are you telling me that Harry learned a whole language in two months from written instructions? There is no possibility of Harry being fluent to speak with the goblins in their native tongue. |
![]() ![]() Where is the rest of this is the end |
![]() ![]() NO ! He sound not |
![]() ![]() This is very good so far |
![]() ![]() A month and a half? That's how long it has taken Harry to do MOST of the first year potions curriculum, plenty of Charms, some Runes (a Third year elective) and become FLUENT in Goblin. I call BS. _ "...worth UP TO 2million Galleons" "worth UP TO six million..." It's MONEY! It's a finite resource with hard numbers defining it. A vault is EITHER two million... or it's NOT. There's no "up to" in banking! _ There's no M-effing, g*dd*mn*d way he put his own extension charm on a money bag, without a wand, five OWLs, and Hermione's help. It's all I can do to not quit. |