Reviews for Life of the Independent |
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![]() ![]() I love this story. What really p***** me off is that someone else has put it on youtube as an autobook. They didn't give any recognition to the one who wrote it or bother to check to see if it was finished. There's no way they got permission seeing as they put it up there a month ago, but the story hasn't been updated since 2022. It's under god harry autobooks. They named it "what if harry discovered a lost Legacy of Merlin " ! |
![]() ![]() Your body and soul need the bitch side to strengthen it, let the bitch side fill you, only when you can defeat me, use your anger, use your hatred, use your lust, they are the only weapons you can rely on right now in our sex battle |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! I would love to save this story but it hasn’t been updated since 2022. Is this story discontinued? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you come back and continue this fanfic. |
![]() ![]() I HATE GOD, I HATE HIM FROM BOTTOM OF MY HEART I WANNA FUCKING HURT GOD LIKE A LOT LIKE FUCKING HURT HIM BY REJECTING HIM AND NOT FOLLOWING HIM AND I'M TRYING TO FIND WAYS TO KILL A GOD BUT I CAN'T I WANNA FUCKING KILL HIM BUT CAN'T SEEM TO FIND WAYS TO KILL THAT OLD BASTARD FUCKING ASSHOLE How could you love a selfish, lying, hypocritical, ignorant, sham of a “God”? How could you even be fond, at the very least, of someone who supposedly ‘sees’ all our pain and suffering, and who has all the power in the world, but chooses to not stop any of it? And, what? He’s created the world and all us humans for his own entertainment. There is no other better explanation. He didn’t have to put us on this world. Hell, we never asked. We never asked for any of this, yet he still put us into existence just to suffer time after time again. He’ll have to beg us for forgiveness at the end of it all. I too despise that sadistic prick that subjected me to this unending nightmare. My life has been an unpleasant experience throughout and my fear of death is the only thing that keeps me alive. Hopefully that will soon be overcome and I will finally be oblivious to this horror |
![]() ![]() Fuck pussy nigger! That's how you think like a real black-skin? you're going to prostrate and beg to your mighty masters and kiss of mom and dad and me foot like stray dog Trying to beg to got a house. Good, I can feel your lust. I am pantsless. Take your dick. Strike me down with all of your lust and your journey towards the bitch side will be complete! Note from the author: you fucking son of a bitch!, Do not delete my favorite comment, Do not anger your master too much Best regards Niggers Hater |
![]() ![]() Know the full power of the Bitch side that flows in my veins, Let the bitch side fill in you, only when you can defeat me, use your anger, use your hatred, use your lust, they are the only weapons you can rely on right now in our sex battle |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kinda hate the interactions between Harry and “The golden trio” it feels more like adults talking than teens. Honestly the interactions with them feel VERY forced overall. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sooo kinda hate the Goblin tongue and courtesy bit. The creatures goblins are based on are Fae folk. Specifically red caps. They do not like humans period. In fact they would likely torture the information on how you knew their language out of you before they would be kind. I like versions of goblins where it is all about greed or money with them because that makes FAR more sense. When you use Gobbledygook (and calling it that seems more like a racist slur against the language than anything else) as something that sets Harry apart it just feels patronizing. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() harry is 15 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Neville the only one to successfully cast the disarming charm? and they are 5th years? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story I truly hope that your muse lets you continue this excellent tale, I will just stop here as I have already liked and favored it so I will patiently await your next post. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Far, So Good, keep iit going. Just a side comment, why do writers name everything in Europe (not just the UK) after Merlin? |