Reviews for Demons
MushuFireLorde chapter 2 . 8/19/2013
Yess. Yess! YEA! I thought fio was gone! I'm so happy! That was a relief. And about wut happened to her, so sad and traumatic. Oh my god and I was reading this story while listening to demons. That was soo...real I could feel fio's pain...ugh. almost started to think this actually happened. Like I've seen it b4. Very emotional chapter indeed.
BoonyTheWolf chapter 2 . 8/19/2013
I love this story.
htffan951 chapter 2 . 8/19/2013
I will tell you know that you did a fantastic job on this chapter. I do like that you gave most of of the characters New names, most being original. I can't help but wonder what will happen next. I will be looking forward to read more.
MushuFireLorde chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Sniff sniff oh I love this like srsly. That touched me drastically since im so bored. This story made my day!
htffan951 chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
It's interesting so far, but I'm going to need to see another chapter before saying whether or not I like this story. I can tell you take you are doing a good job so far. If I could make one suggestion it would be to try and make each chapter at least 1000 words.