Out of all the cliches and nonsense calling Zabuzza an S ranked nin is the worst one ️️ Even Kakashi couldnt be considered S rank until the war arc. Zabuzza was a mid A rank. The difference between S rank and A rank is the difference between a chunin level shinobi like Haku and a genin like Sakura. Kakashi and Zabuzza together get absolutely slapped by even Sasori. Deidara was not really S rank level but even he slaps Kakashi and Zabuzza together.

like sakura can do something lol

yeah, of course you would make her win

no you're not evenly matched

AH GO FUCK YOURSELF

no, you're not in his level

imagine decline training because your girlfriend helped you to learn 1 pathetic jutsu

wtf?

how the FUCK hinata knows what rinnegan is

pls this isn't only cliche it is PATHETIC

wtf rock lee was already graduated that timd

Truly this was an awesome and incredible story to read. With the changes you did, both on the plot, development and characters, you sure have done a great job into this. Truly a masterpiece this has been.

Naruto was born with the whisker-like birthmarks, I don't know why people think he gained them after becoming Kurama's jinchuriki. The only way to be able to receive those is to directly absorb Kurama's chakra in some sort of fashion, ie eating Kurama or be the offspring of Kurama's jinchuriki. The children of a female jinchuriki will have the full three whiskers on the cheeks while the children of a male jinchuriki will only have two on each cheek. The reason why it's because children of a female jinchuriki would have been constantly absorbing minuscule amounts of Kurama's chakra for 9-10 months while the children of a male jinchuriki will only have one shot of a minuscule amount of Kurama's chakra. This means that the children of a female jinchuriki will have more chakra and heal faster than the children of a male jinchuriki. I'm not saying that the children of a male jinchuriki will not have more chakra and heal faster if their parent wasn't a jinchuriki, in fact they would have more chakra and heal faster than normal even if they were a full-blooded Uzumaki. Why mention the Uzumaki, the reason why is because only an Uzumaki can handle being the jinchuriki of Kurama. Before you ask how come Tsunade and Nawaki didn't have any whisker-like birthmarks, first of all were you even paying attention to what I was saying and second of all was either one of their parents the jinchuriki of Kurama? The answer should be obvious.

Your law of FanFiction makes your story weak.

excellent end to the war! Splendid action through and through!

Madara just killed Kaguya! WOW! This is beyond EXCELLENT!

Madara has lost and Obito has won. What an excellent twist.