That test was terrible...

Cringe fic

... I know you said we would cringe at some of the tropes... but they weren't that bad. The thing that made me cringe and want to stop reading was Naruto's "prank"... the idea that ANYONE thought it was a good idea is laughable at best, the idea that Jiraiya, an almost Kage-level ninja, got snuck up on AND didn't recognize Hinata while she was using chakra (because having the Byakugan active REQUIRES chakra use) is completely unbelievable.

But back to why I think the "plan" in and of itself is bad. 1. No one is going to believe that a KID is S-rank, yet alone that there are multiple children being S-rank practically fresh out of the Academy.
2. The people of Konoha are even less likely to believe it if they know Naruto is the supposed leader, meaning that any rumors of it that spread will have the caveat that the group is fake, or a bunch of weaklings. Also leading to a loss of faith in the Sannin if the rumor that Jiraiya got beaten by them is spread.
3. Even if, SOMEHOW, the people of Konoha do believe that these children are at or near S-rank, and DO spread the rumor of a supposed to be secret organization... all that does is make groups like the Akatsuki attack sooner and with greater force, because they still want the nine tails and would rather attack now, before these supposed badasses get stronger as they reach their prime... all of which anyone who does study strategy would figure out relatively easily.

To be clear, I'm going to try and read this anyway, but this is the thing that I find more off-putting than any "over-used" tropes.

I gotta give fhe author plenty of points for those small jokes that he writes from time to time. They really makes me laugh

Poor Asuma, we can be sure that Mirai won't never born now lol

no no no no no no no no no no no no
the black suit is entirely a hollywood invention
probably actually adapted from the stage hands for plays and puppet shows that would wear all black to blend in with the backgrounds
real ninja (for a given value of there having been operatives identifiable as 'ninja') would dress like the people around them to blend in. And if you wanna sneak around at night well you want to break up your profile. That's the whole point of camouflage after all. Soldiers aren't running around in all black outfits no matter what Delta Force might tell you.

One of the first rules of infiltration is to act like you belong where you are. And that means dressing the part.

please
edit this chapter
and get rid of the reference to A/B/O dynamics
Those aren't a thing and the guy who came up with the idea of 'alphas' was an idiot.

1: Asuma's dream of beating Shikamaru doesn't make sense since he's a fresh graduate (and he can beat him easily at this point in time in canon) I think you meant Shikaku here (his father). 2: Uzumaki Clan didn't seem to be publicly known, Naruto was considered a clanless orphan to most, especially those in his generation. 3: Kiba would not know about Akatsuki, only the Hokage seems to know a very minor amount about them and that's due to Jiraiya's spy network and Itachi's infiltration which a fresh genin would know nothing about. 4: Rock Lee would not be in a team with anyone graduating at this point in time unless he was held back and thus not met his personal sensei/master Maito Gai in this fic since he graduated a year earlier alongisde Neji and Tenten as they are older than the rest of the rookies. 5: I do not know why so many fics get this wrong but Hinata's chakra nature is fire and lightning, the same as Sasuke's, it's possibly due to her learning a singular water jutsu in canon called water needles though. (which didn't make much sense her learning when it wasn't her primary or secondary element in canon either, but then she had a genjutsu specialist as a jonin sensei for a tracking team where none of them learnt any genjutsu from her which never made any sense either)

What? Its not that its always the best Kunoichi The best student and the deadlast not the weakest and genjutsu has nothing to do with it and if it did then sasuke would be the genjutsu specialist with his sharingan

wait a minute blond hair? doesn't he have white hair now as a result of what happened in Wave Country?

I enjoyed the story. Great work on the story.

First chapter and already laughing my ass off. Is this a crack fic?

A bit late here but fun fact, Sasuke and Hinata have the same chakra natures, Lightning and Fire

This is such nice fluff.

another messiah wannabe fic.. fucking hell