Reviews for Condemned to Life
Kemq chapter 2 . 6/25
Good story.
BELAVERA chapter 2 . 8/17/2015
I, like you, am glad it is over. What a terrible story! You really made me cry during the whole thing. So you did a very good job of touching my emotions (what a good author does when using his or her words to reach out to her readers). I am impressed with your talent, but please don't write anything like that again! I must now find and read a most cheerful story to remind myself that they are only literary characters that I care about.
Kochabilka chapter 2 . 4/9/2015
This was a really good story.
RogueAlly chapter 2 . 2/24/2015
This is oddly disturbing but good at the same time. Although I'm glad Bella didn't kill herself in the books, it seemed like a possible consequence at the time. You wrote it very convincingly. I also liked how Edward was punished.
Horizon77 chapter 2 . 1/11/2014
What a gut wrenching experimental take on NM. Very canon plausible, right down to Alice way of "saving" Edward from taking his life. I love finding new Twilight authors with a mature writing style. Thanks for sharing! Eager to go read more from you. :)
kelley77 chapter 2 . 9/30/2013
oh wow...beautifully written, but absolutely heart breaking. I'm crying as I type this. Thanks for sharing though. Wonderful writing as always.
Golden Eyed Writer chapter 2 . 8/23/2013
Man, reading about Bella's death made it feel like my heart got lodged up into my throat. :/

Good job on writing the story, though!

Golden Eyed Writer
Guest chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
I think he should kill himself. Maybe they would be together in afterlife.
VLJH chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
This is devastatingly powerful...as someone whose husband died (albeit not a suicide) young, this resonates with me...for more than a year after he died, I was Edward...living, but not much else. In fact, I'd say I was existing.
LindyP chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
Wow! That was so, so sad! I usually hate reading character deaths( especially Edward & Bella) but that was powerfully written! Thank you!
Edward'sDJ chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
*Sob*
I wish Alice could have seen all of this, in this detail, while Bella was still alive.
Very touching, thank you.
Nerdlee chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
Jimminy Cricket but that was painful. You have taken stabbing with your penmanship to Olympic levels here.

Mia
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
Very well written.
Shamatt0403 chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
That was heartbreaking.
ajendas chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
Wow, how depressing !
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