|Reviews for Condemned to Life|
| Horizon77 chapter 2 . 1/11
What a gut wrenching experimental take on NM. Very canon plausible, right down to Alice way of "saving" Edward from taking his life. I love finding new Twilight authors with a mature writing style. Thanks for sharing! Eager to go read more from you. :)
| kelley77 chapter 2 . 9/30/2013
oh wow...beautifully written, but absolutely heart breaking. I'm crying as I type this. Thanks for sharing though. Wonderful writing as always.
| Golden Eyed Writer chapter 2 . 8/23/2013
Man, reading about Bella's death made it feel like my heart got lodged up into my throat. :/
Good job on writing the story, though!
Golden Eyed Writer
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
I think he should kill himself. Maybe they would be together in afterlife.
| VLJH chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
This is devastatingly powerful...as someone whose husband died (albeit not a suicide) young, this resonates with me...for more than a year after he died, I was Edward...living, but not much else. In fact, I'd say I was existing.
| LindyP chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
Wow! That was so, so sad! I usually hate reading character deaths( especially Edward & Bella) but that was powerfully written! Thank you!
| Edward'sDJ chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
I wish Alice could have seen all of this, in this detail, while Bella was still alive.
Very touching, thank you.
| Nerdlee chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
Jimminy Cricket but that was painful. You have taken stabbing with your penmanship to Olympic levels here.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
Very well written.
| Shamatt0403 chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
That was heartbreaking.
| ajendas chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
Wow, how depressing !
| moniquecullen chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
Oh God. How heartbreaking. How horrible that he went five years with no contact. He ruined so many lives with no knowledge of it for so long. If I was Alice I would have been angry too. And it does seem fitting punishment that he live with the guilt . Unbearably cruel, but fitting. Poor ...everyone!
| sanjyp chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
Great story. Well written. Thank you.
| RogueRaina chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
| frostedglaze chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
This was so sad, but Edward deserved to live with all the pain. He was the cause of it all. I agree with Alice, he loved being the martyr so much, that it seems fitting that he actually became one.