Reviews for The Rule of Thirds
Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
Unique. Creative. B'Elanna-intuitive. Cleverly done.
Sonar chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
I loved that.
CrlkSeasons chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
I didn't mind the 'on the first time". It fit the tone of the 'rule of thirds'.
I laughed at Vorik's controlled Vulcan duck. I was surprised that more people didn't lose patience with the Doctor's ill-timed photography - although I always thought that it was his way have having an excuse to socialize more with the crew. I noticed and liked how you fit in a reference to the shot of B'Elanna's foot that got cut from the second showing of the Doctor's slide presentation.
A cute piece and a fun read.
Delwin chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
Absolutely love it! B'Elanna, the Doctor, the supporting cast of minor characters - all perfect. My favorite exchange may be:

"Well, why not make it 'A Day in the Life of a Warp Nacelle'," B'Elanna suggests. Helpfully, she thinks.

Dalby smirks. Vorik raises an eyebrow and gives a subtle nod of approval. The Doctor looks indignant.

Such great portraits of each character with only a few words.
Thank you again for making my morning!
skadoo chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
I liked this but I thought "...on the first time of asking." sounded a little awkward. It would sound better to say "the first time."