Reviews for The second coming of the Sage
Guest chapter 3 . 4/3
Update? Please
Guest chapter 3 . 7/20/2017
You sick
amenoshimai1 chapter 2 . 4/8/2017
Onee-chan means "big sister" while you meant little sister in which case you would need to write "Imouto" also "Sasuki" sounds as if you gave her a boy's name personally I would have called her "Sayuki" (not trying to sound like a stuck-up little shit, sorry if I sounded like one)
Donov3 chapter 3 . 5/3/2015
Dude. I don't know why you are taking so long with the chapter. Just write whatever you feel like writing.
PS. I really like your story I can not wait to read the next chapters.
Dreamweaver chapter 3 . 4/26/2015
Great just great I have to read this when the rest come out
Shodaime Gahokage chapter 2 . 12/3/2014
why is Naruto calling Natsumi "Big sis" (nee-chan) instead of "lil sis" (Imouto-chan) when he is older then her?
Guest chapter 3 . 8/6/2014
fuck you and your AN! just decide the summoning your self! its your fic right! no need for poll shit thing! just write, and post it you indecisive maggot!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/6/2014
oi stupid! 'nee-chan' means older sister! 'imouto' means little sister!
whitestriker1219 chapter 3 . 6/1/2014
Yo, you gonna post ch. 3?
uzuuchi007 chapter 3 . 5/9/2014
Doom Marine 54 chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
Naruto is already smart he's just not some gay ass gary-stu like in this shitty fic.
Generation Zero chapter 2 . 11/27/2013
Comeon just update already
Guest chapter 3 . 11/1/2013
very good, loved
Frytrix chapter 3 . 10/23/2013
while the idea for the story is good, could Your spelling use some work.
coduss chapter 3 . 10/14/2013
hope this story comes back soon
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