|Reviews for The second coming of the Sage|
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/3
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/20/2017
| amenoshimai1 chapter 2 . 4/8/2017
Onee-chan means "big sister" while you meant little sister in which case you would need to write "Imouto" also "Sasuki" sounds as if you gave her a boy's name personally I would have called her "Sayuki" (not trying to sound like a stuck-up little shit, sorry if I sounded like one)
| Donov3 chapter 3 . 5/3/2015
Dude. I don't know why you are taking so long with the chapter. Just write whatever you feel like writing.
PS. I really like your story I can not wait to read the next chapters.
| Dreamweaver chapter 3 . 4/26/2015
Great just great I have to read this when the rest come out
| Shodaime Gahokage chapter 2 . 12/3/2014
why is Naruto calling Natsumi "Big sis" (nee-chan) instead of "lil sis" (Imouto-chan) when he is older then her?
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/6/2014
fuck you and your AN! just decide the summoning your self! its your fic right! no need for poll shit thing! just write, and post it you indecisive maggot!
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/6/2014
oi stupid! 'nee-chan' means older sister! 'imouto' means little sister!
| whitestriker1219 chapter 3 . 6/1/2014
Yo, you gonna post ch. 3?
| uzuuchi007 chapter 3 . 5/9/2014
| Doom Marine 54 chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
Naruto is already smart he's just not some gay ass gary-stu like in this shitty fic.
| Generation Zero chapter 2 . 11/27/2013
Comeon just update already
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/1/2013
very good, loved
| Frytrix chapter 3 . 10/23/2013
while the idea for the story is good, could Your spelling use some work.
| coduss chapter 3 . 10/14/2013
hope this story comes back soon