|Reviews for The Trickster's Tale|
| Ophelia Claire chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
Homelessness. Who would have thought that someone like Loki would ever experience the suffering of mortal homelessness?
| Marvelite5Ever chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
*crying silently* *curses* You broke my heart with this, you really did. I know not what to say, besides how unequivocally awful and cruel the punishment is and everything that has happened to Loki oh my gods and THOR THINKS HE'S OKAY AND WHEN WILL HE ASK AND FIGURE IT OUT AND DJSKFJDSKFLJDSFLKSJDLKFJASLDKJFKLSJDFK *sobs* Just... ow... this chapter was really difficult to read...
| Because I Can and Will chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
Wow intense chapter, but nicely done.
| Pink Iced Llamanade chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
Man and I thought chapter two was depressing. I can just see the light leaving his eyes. Is it going to continue to plunge downwards though. Like how much worse can it get. I hope things will start looking up for Loki. Though it'll probably be an agonizingly slow and gradual up. Thank you so much for updating and I'm glad you enjoy your college!
| SnarryMoreidLover chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
Oh poor loki he doesn't deserve this I wonder how he will be when thor finds him poor poor loki
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
"It was not his fault, after all, that Loki was the madman he'd become." What an ugly lie Thor lies to himself in his self-righteous blindness... It is EXACTLY his, his father and mother, and the rest of Asgard's fault... And now Loki who deserves forgiveness after so much crueler punishment so much more than Thor for what he did once is to lie ruined, dying and begging for something that should have been given even without such a debasement if there was even a spark of true familial feeling or love, or justice, or fairness in these Asgardian monsters Loki has the misfortune to be raised into the family and world of and to love still... And Thor - the self-righteous cold monster - is to be king and considered "fair", but Loki - still considered "evil"...
And Thor cares more for any midgardian than for his supposed brother... He disgusts me so profoundly - all Asgardians in fact...
My heart breaks for Loki's suffering and for his so heartfelt repentance and regret that no living being seems to acknowledge...! Poor he...!
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
That's tragic! Poor, poor, poor Loki...! And they are abominations despite all that gold - those who pushed him and continue to push him towards ultimate emotional and physical deterioration, debasement, death... Heimdall and the rest of the Asgardian monsters... I hope Loki will get, somehow, reaaly better and have a real chance in life...! And that the hypocrisy and cruelty of Odin, Heimdall, and also Thor, Frigga and the rest of the cold-hearted big-but-empty-worded hypocrites and monsters in the "golden" kingdom to be revealed. None of the adoptive "family" of Loki deserves him at this point, for they are monsters, who hurt him and self-righteously continue hurting and not caring for him... I wonder will Thor acknowledge the cruelty and monstrosity of what is being done to Loki, of his suffering, will he ever know about it AT ALL and will he acknowledge the horror of it... and his and his mother's failure not just as a caring brother and mother but as decent people with their superficial play at "care"...
Oh my heart breaks, really!
Please, do it better for Loki...!
Please, make the hypocrites at the very least utterly ashamed of themselves... I am so disguster of them and their "reasonings" and their blindness to their own faults and the torture and lack of any, even the most basic emotional and physical care they condone for a person who is redeemed himself, who has sunk to the very bottom, while professing "love" and "care" for this victim and still think him a guilty evil person, while thinking themselves better than the self-righteous cold bigoted hypocrites they are...
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
This is really good! update soon!
| Because I Can and Will chapter 2 . 8/22/2013
Oh dear I hope Loki does turn suicidal with the need for rescuing.
| Rocky181 chapter 2 . 8/22/2013
Awesome chapter! Update soon! Good luck with school!
| Marvelite5Ever chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
Aagghhh! That is... ow... I don't even know the correct word... terrible? Painful? Already-so-many-sad-Loki-feels?
First seeing how truly awful that punishment is for Loki, seeing him spiraling down into darkness and despair - then to remorse, and I have a feeling that that would have been the opportune moment to bring Loki back, when he's truly sorry, and ignoring his plea will just ruin him and make his condition far, far worse - and then seeing Heimdall lie (because Loki's situation did change!) and seeing how Thor and Frigga believed Loki was doing well and getting off rather easy... when he's really, really not.. because dammit, Thor, you got banished to a nice town as a human and met a girl and fell in love and it all went nice and dandy, and here Loki is as a Jotun wandering New York... it's awful how Odin made Loki unable to make any sort of life for himself because of his appearance as what he truly is, and forcing himself into exactly what he hates... I hate Odin. And I think I'm going to be saying that a lot. Because he broke Loki... and what was the point of that punishment? It doesn't at all seem like it was to redeem Loki - if any way it was he would have taken Loki back when Loki pleads, because you can tell Loki's telling the truth about being sorry, even if he probably doesn't understand (because really, if he wanted to redeem Loki and make him truly regret his actions you'd think he would put Loki in a position where he learns to appreciate the mortals?) so that brings me to the conclusion that Odin just wants Loki to suffer, and if he forsakes Loki that easily it makes me dubious as to how much he ever really cared about Loki at all. And Thor! Dammit, saying that Loki becoming a madman wasn't Thor's fault, which yeah it wasn't completely, but Thor was definitely a part of what drove Loki down that path! But that Odin has lied to his wife and son about the conditions of Loki's banishment... I'm really eager to see when Thor finally finds out about Loki, since Thor and Loki are the main characters listed so I'm assuming it's Thor that ends up helping Loki.
And, um... *glances upwards* Yikes, I ranted... you're already giving me so many feels! :P
Awesome chapter! *-* I can't wait to read what happens next!
| FullMetalBlunt chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
I'm always a sucker for homeless Loki 3
| Ireland Ranger chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
Dang...did that darn gatekeeper just lie?! Grrrrr! Please update soon!
| Marvel-Tolkien Fangirl chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
OMG, poor Loki! Living like that for years, self-harming, and begging for forgiveness...and his family think this is good for him, as long as he doesn't cause mischief...would it kill Frigga, at least, to look a bit deeper! Wonder if Heimdall will intervene, like he did in WFLT? I hope Tony finds Loki soon, before it's too late!
| msgone chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
Well, Heimdall sure knows how to keep everyone in the dark