|Reviews for The Trickster's Tale|
| Kalavel Loki chapter 3 . 8/26/2013
can I kill heimdall now?
| Maia2 chapter 3 . 8/26/2013
Ouch, depressing, huh? Poor Loki. I can't believe Heimdall would do nothing at this. I understand he must be under Odin's orders. But he had no problem defying Loki's orders when he was king, did he? Oh, and yes, I know I am taking it out on Heimdall, it's just so painful. Six years. Six years of no one doing anything, of Thor asking and only hearing what Heimdall tells him, instead of what he's not telling him; of Frigga doing the same; of Odin not caring or ignoring it. And yes, six years might be nothing to them. But then, a few hours were enough for Loki to completely lose his mind when he discovered he was Jotun, weren't they? 3 days were enough for Thor to be deemed worthy again.
This won't go on for too much longer... will it? Poor Loki.
| Ynath Esrith chapter 3 . 8/26/2013
I HATE Odin. With a vengeance.
| KJ4aNightmare chapter 3 . 8/26/2013
You're right. It can get worse and this chapter definitely reflected it. But now I seriously have to wonder, how can it?
You had me in tears for our trickster's plight. I can only wonder how those "so-called" gods can even live with themselves thinking that this is the only way...then again, I'm not one of them to understand.
| FullMetalBlunt chapter 3 . 8/26/2013
It just keeps getting worse and worse for Loki.
| cara-tanaka chapter 3 . 8/26/2013
I really really effing hate Odin. Like wtf? I really hope Loki gets help soon, please. When the hell is someone gonna wake up and realize what's happening to him? Update soon.
| Ardhoniel Marvelite chapter 3 . 8/26/2013
Oh. My. God. WHY ARE THE ASGARDIANS LETTING ALL THIS HAPPEN? Heimdall /must/ know how bad things are...I sincerely hope things look up soon. Six years is way too harsh!
| Ophelia Claire chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
Homelessness. Who would have thought that someone like Loki would ever experience the suffering of mortal homelessness?
| Self-Inflicted Insanity chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
*crying silently* *curses* You broke my heart with this, you really did. I know not what to say, besides how unequivocally awful and cruel the punishment is and everything that has happened to Loki oh my gods and THOR THINKS HE'S OKAY AND WHEN WILL HE ASK AND FIGURE IT OUT AND DJSKFJDSKFLJDSFLKSJDLKFJASLDKJFKLSJDFK *sobs* Just... ow... this chapter was really difficult to read...
| Because I Can and Will chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
Wow intense chapter, but nicely done.
| Pink Iced Llamanade chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
Man and I thought chapter two was depressing. I can just see the light leaving his eyes. Is it going to continue to plunge downwards though. Like how much worse can it get. I hope things will start looking up for Loki. Though it'll probably be an agonizingly slow and gradual up. Thank you so much for updating and I'm glad you enjoy your college!
| SnarryMoreidLover chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
Oh poor loki he doesn't deserve this I wonder how he will be when thor finds him poor poor loki
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
"It was not his fault, after all, that Loki was the madman he'd become." What an ugly lie Thor lies to himself in his self-righteous blindness... It is EXACTLY his, his father and mother, and the rest of Asgard's fault... And now Loki who deserves forgiveness after so much crueler punishment so much more than Thor for what he did once is to lie ruined, dying and begging for something that should have been given even without such a debasement if there was even a spark of true familial feeling or love, or justice, or fairness in these Asgardian monsters Loki has the misfortune to be raised into the family and world of and to love still... And Thor - the self-righteous cold monster - is to be king and considered "fair", but Loki - still considered "evil"...
And Thor cares more for any midgardian than for his supposed brother... He disgusts me so profoundly - all Asgardians in fact...
My heart breaks for Loki's suffering and for his so heartfelt repentance and regret that no living being seems to acknowledge...! Poor he...!
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
That's tragic! Poor, poor, poor Loki...! And they are abominations despite all that gold - those who pushed him and continue to push him towards ultimate emotional and physical deterioration, debasement, death... Heimdall and the rest of the Asgardian monsters... I hope Loki will get, somehow, reaaly better and have a real chance in life...! And that the hypocrisy and cruelty of Odin, Heimdall, and also Thor, Frigga and the rest of the cold-hearted big-but-empty-worded hypocrites and monsters in the "golden" kingdom to be revealed. None of the adoptive "family" of Loki deserves him at this point, for they are monsters, who hurt him and self-righteously continue hurting and not caring for him... I wonder will Thor acknowledge the cruelty and monstrosity of what is being done to Loki, of his suffering, will he ever know about it AT ALL and will he acknowledge the horror of it... and his and his mother's failure not just as a caring brother and mother but as decent people with their superficial play at "care"...
Oh my heart breaks, really!
Please, do it better for Loki...!
Please, make the hypocrites at the very least utterly ashamed of themselves... I am so disguster of them and their "reasonings" and their blindness to their own faults and the torture and lack of any, even the most basic emotional and physical care they condone for a person who is redeemed himself, who has sunk to the very bottom, while professing "love" and "care" for this victim and still think him a guilty evil person, while thinking themselves better than the self-righteous cold bigoted hypocrites they are...
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/20/2013
This is really good! update soon!