Reviews for The First Namikaze
Lonewolf1836 chapter 28 . 11/13
This was a great story when i first started reading i dint know what to expect nor did i see how you made the story unique by including over 50 years of shinobi history and integrating all the characters in over time as well as the wars. For the character development i liked that he was never over powered at the get go or that he became a badass after 2 years but the fact that he became well knows after many years. I did hate the fact he only had 2 kids seriously? I mean if you made 2 more id like that its not they had any huge parts to start with. And my only questions are will you aver continue this story after many years also will naruto ever remember who he was i mean at this point everything he knew be useless sinse all has changed much anyways i enjoyed this story alot and its worth reading.
serus black antihumannature chapter 28 . 11/2
good work i just read it all but u need stated the out come for the hugya that naruto did also thank u for not going the kygua route for the au naruto travaled to caon narto makes no sence when klyagya was intraduced
Spiked29 chapter 13 . 9/17
those people naruto is fighting are like humanized forms of the Biju which means tthere are 5 left unless he includes the Ten-Tails then there are 6 people left
GREATEST FAN chapter 28 . 9/11
I though there would be another chapter by march? :( It's september now, please don't tell me the story has been dropped? It was, is, my favorite story to date...
Guest chapter 8 . 9/8
Amazing story so far, I like the story progression and how you don't just focus on single points great plot can't wait to finish this story, I'm a fanfic die hard and have read hundreds of them kudos to you, you kinda left out Naruto "revenge plans" but nothing has left me wondering, so thx a really good pass time and you vocab is on point a couple misspells and connotations but over all 9 out of 10. Ps lemon need work, more plot passion you know like us just yearning for attention and seeking pleasure.
hamsterville chapter 3 . 8/18
umm. story was getting good. OP naruto, i didn't mind the memory loss, he's been training for years, his family is hidden, then BOOM! people find his home and he's suddenly too weak to protect his mom? why build someone up as being OP just to throw it all away? oh well, that's it for me. a lot of people seem to like it so I'll say good luck with that and hope you continue to update for them. cheers
Davidlhson chapter 28 . 8/17
Looking forward to the next chapter keep them coming
Lord Redmoon chapter 3 . 6/25
and so we have two people in identified slaughter his mother while knowing far more then they should about him, so either they are time travels or otherworldly being. when authors do this it is so fricken annoying. just make sinobi who killed his mother and be done with it.
HelpfulNudge chapter 1 . 5/15
so as I start, the grammer is making it hard to get into this... but the premise and plot makes me want to read more... So I'll try to persevere...
HelpfulNudge chapter 1 . 5/15
impervious is the wrong word.
Mr. Kohl chapter 28 . 5/14
I'm really loving this story. this is May already though. please update ASAP
Chapter chapter 28 . 5/11
WHERE IS MY CHAPTER!?
korlinki chapter 4 . 4/28
good story but still naive stupid child Naruto nothig changes except time
Namikaze Uzumaki Naruto0831 chapter 28 . 4/23
please update soon am waiting
ddentler21 chapter 20 . 4/22
This story's fantastic. I hadn't come across one from this time period that's plot still flowed this naturally.
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