|Reviews for Enemy Series - Story 1 - Across Enemy Lines|
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/9/2013
I thought the candle was blown out.
| iAnimeDarkAngel chapter 7 . 8/12/2013
So this is the first Dramione fanfic ever, huh. Not bad. It seems like Dramione been around for quite a while now. Although this story isn't that realistic, it was still worth reading! :)
| Soccerisawesome19 chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
Ooh... I love Dramione's, and this is AWESOME! :)
| Kitty chapter 7 . 3/17/2013
im pretty much crying, it is so good... i love this :)
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/16/2012
I agree with some of these people...this fic definitely isn't very realistic, nor does it show the true characters of Draco, Hermione and especially Dumbledore. However, credit where friggin credit is due...YOU CREATED DRAMIONE!
And for that, i say thank you, from the the bottom og my fan girl heart. Dramione is and will forever be a huge part of my life and loves, and i thank you for creating this fic.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
The first dramione fic O.O. I...just...wow..don't know what to say. You are AMAZING.
| MissMoBaby chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Thank you so much for discovering what Draco and Hermione could be! I feel like i'm reading a piece of history!
| lifeisharrypotter chapter 7 . 7/16/2012
It's really pretty, but kinda... Unrealistic? I mean, dumbledore wudnt talk lykndat etc etc
| Effinlatebloomer chapter 7 . 6/5/2012
That awkward moment when you read a fanfic which every bloody person complimented so much but you're just sitting here, staring blankly at the screen, like 'NO!'
Yep, I feel really awkward and lonely seeming to be the only one who hate this fanfic. It was kind of sweet and fluffy I admit, but was nothing compared to the annoyance I felt as I tried so freaking hard to finish the story since it left me no interest at all. The sentences are too short and the dialogues appeared shallow to me - they held no depth, no logic whatsoever and just plain boring. It did, in fact, disappoint me a great deal, being the first Dramione fanfic and all... You made the characters overreact a whole damn lot about every damn thing. I mean, really? Why would they feel "angry" and "irritated" and the need to yell, scream, shout, snap etc...so easily? I swear to you, the overuse of the word "angry/anger" gets on my nerves every time I see it, it never failed to anger me - as you might put it.
I'm sorry if my review sounded harsh, even though I'm perfectly aware that this story was written some time a decade ago and there's no point arguing about it now, but if not on here, I don't have anywhere else to release my frustration caused by this. Further more I was never a kind/gentle person, so sorry if my choice of words displeased you. I'll try to check out other works of yours to see if your writing had improved after this first debut when I have time. :P
| krc101 chapter 7 . 2/27/2012
that was nice! i love it!
| emerald.swan chapter 7 . 1/22/2012
Oh my god!You are the one who wrote the first fanfiction story about dramione, the one who started it all!I love this ship!I am so happy to have read this story!Amazing!
| DZAuthor AKA DZMom chapter 7 . 1/10/2012
This was a sweet romance. The one that started it all, eh? Dramione: always. I enjoyed all the creativity and thought that went into setting up the secret entrance to the tower and Snape's secret intention to allow the Slytherin-Griffindor romance to flourish. The additions of Peeves, the Bloody Baron and the talking mirror made the story take on the magical Hogwarts atmosphere.
| Cadentia chapter 7 . 9/19/2011
THIS IS THE GREATEST FANFICTION OF HG X DM EVER
I COULD CRY FROM ALL THEIR HAPPINESS 3
now off to read part 2 and 3
| CrissTWriter chapter 7 . 9/17/2011
Ever so fluffy! Buuuuuuuut it is so very interesting. Good job!
| stay.traught.i'm.deactivated chapter 7 . 9/3/2011
Oh. My. Bloody. Hell. YOU CREATED DRAMIONE! -bows down at your feet- I LOVE this pairing!
You. Are. A. Bloody. GENIUS! I feel honored to be in your presence.
Oh my FREAKING gosh, I could just FAINT! I'm in the presence of the creator of Dramione! I love saying that!
Thanks SO SO SO much got creating the pairing. Words cannot describe how happy I am to be actually reading the FIRST EVER Dramione story.
I could just DIE of euphoria!