Reviews for Collapse
heyhey62 chapter 11 . 1/6
I LOVE this story so much! Please upload the new chapter soon!
EmpressMinea chapter 11 . 10/22/2014
Better update this...has so much potential!
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 11 . 9/27/2014
Cliffy much! Update soon please.
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 9 . 9/27/2014
I'm still trying to figure out his first condition
Neko-chan chapter 11 . 8/31/2014
Oh god, Did Takano san find out about Ritsu? I want to read the next update so bad I think ill go crazy. I wish you the best of luck in finishing the next chapter and in finishing the whole story.
Neko chan chapter 2 . 8/31/2014
Umm... Hi this is Neko chan im sorry if I cant tell my real name but please read my comment. I realy think this story's good, and please dont lack confidence this story is realy interesting and I wish to read it until the end, until then please hang in there and do youre best. Im sorry if this is all Imcould write but you see this is actually my first time.
AmandatheFox chapter 11 . 7/19/2014
This story is great pleease continue posting...I really love reading things about the Uke's being sick and all and their aren't many of those so please hurry with the next chappy
toast4219 chapter 11 . 7/5/2014
I love your story
Guest chapter 3 . 6/4/2014
mitzcalimlim chapter 11 . 4/28/2014
Frequent Reader chapter 11 . 3/24/2014
Glad to see you didn't give up! :)

I saw your update earlier and saw it was messed up, I was gonna comment but thought maybe it could be fanfiction and to just check back later on.

I loved this chapter! I wonder what Massamune is gonna do when he realizes what those meds are really for. Plus I wonder how you're gonna fit M-Preg in here. Well if you decide to do it...which I hope you will Lol ;)

Can't wait for your next update! XD
Guest chapter 11 . 3/24/2014
This chapter got messed up A LOT. When transferring fanfictions through Copy and Paste, sometimes they got lost in translation and this is what happened. Please fix this chapter so we can actually read it.
Frequent Reader chapter 11 . 3/22/2014
Personally I would love to see M-Preg.
There's so little in this fandom...and the ones that due exist the authors have yet to update, or even get to that point...

Don't give up on this story. It's great. Don't worry about people not commenting, just because they don't comment doesn't mean they aren't me I know. I'm one of those people. Sorry :/ I just don't have the time sometimes...

The only reason I'm commenting now is because I hate to see an author get down and give up on their story. Especially when it's really good. I hate when authors don't finish, or disappear randomly. It's annoying and discouraging to the makes the readers not want to read anything you post in the future because they're always gonna think you're not gonna finish it...

So I'm rooting for you! :)
Don't give up, don't due "Half-assed work" as Massamune would say! Lol XD

I'll be looking out for your update! :)
wendyls96 chapter 11 . 3/23/2014
Don't give up, this is a good story. First I think you have to have Ritsu tell Takano what's going on. Then he can help him through it, and maybe later as a side effect of the drug they gave him for the tumors could make it possible for him to get pregnant. That would be interesting. Hope this helps, and I hope you won't give up. Good Luck !
chibihyu chapter 11 . 3/22/2014
Well hello there! great that even if you upload a chapter, at least ask for help ee much this fic is not put into updating and is one that makes me like it ...
I give aid
as you left ritsu where he learns he has cancer ...
that Ristu to avoid Takano, natural corral ee mind Takano Ritsu and tell you everything that happens ... when he says, Takano cries, hugs ... and come to that ... I mean the lemon: P
(which avoids ritsu when takano to last about takano caps ... that is even more worry (?)
ee have more ideas, but not if I already pass these
If! would be nice if there is a sequel in a Mpreg but Takano accept late as you can get pregnant ...
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