Reviews for Sonic: After the Fact
Guest chapter 7 . 11/19/2015
Chuckles D chapter 7 . 11/14/2013
*me hiding behind a rock, with Knuckles in the background searching for somthing*
Me: Ok, I better finish this review quickly because I was chuckling through out every short story! I couldn't help it! They were so funny I just had to!
Knuckles: I know your here... somewhere... *looking into a nearby bush while mumbling*
...I heard her shouting so she must be around this area... *rubs his head* hmmm...
Me*whispering*: I better hurry up and get out of here... anyway, I just wanted to say that these storys are amazing! *still whispering* They were really funny and I couldn't help but chuckle... -_- and that's why I'm hiding from Knuckles. *points her thumb behind me over the rock towards Knuckles' direction*
*Knuckles is getting closer and closer to the rock as he looks for me while Shadow is helping*
Me: oh yeah! I... um stumbled upon the chaos garden to find a battered Sonic with Shadow next to him looking angrily at me while petting a chao... so yeah, I'm stuck. I've got notice Shadow and Knuckles after me... hehe, those stories were funny *I chuckle*
Knuckles and Shadow: FOUND YOU!
Me: wha... *I look up to find them looking at me* ...AHHHHH! HEEEEELLLP MEEEEEEEEEE! *Knuckles and Shadow drag me where 'no one will hear my screams'*
*suddenly a girls spine chilling scream echoes through out the universe*
*later, Knuckles is seen staggering out of the forest with a pained face. Let's just say I managed to kick him where it hurts*
Shadow: ouch! That must of hurt!
*Knuckles flares at him*
Knuckles: You think!
Shadow: who knew you screamed like a girl...
*shadow starts to chuckle then he bursts out laughing*
Knuckles: STOP CHUCKLING! * punches Shadow and they start fighting*
Me: one word... FREEDOM! I'M ALIVE! And I got out without a scratch!
Sonic: pff... lucky! ... WOAH!
*me and Sonic just miss the flying tree... yeah that's right, a flying tree*
Me: uh...
*we both look at eachother and nod*
Sonic: Let's get out of here before it gets worse
Me: agreed. Let's go!
*we run at sonic speed out of the forest as Knuckles is seen with a machine gun fireing it like at mad man*
starfiction123 chapter 7 . 8/29/2013
I reiterate do. Not. Show. Sonics. Laugh. From 06!
seishii chapter 7 . 8/28/2013
That was the most scariest shit I've ever read!
Jacob Prower chapter 7 . 8/28/2013
Hmm a comic. I like the idea especially with your writing skill. This will come out great! And don't worry so much about the request. If you get to do it. Thats awesome!, and if not its ok to. I appreciate that you took the time to try. Thank you.

Sincerely, Jacob Prower
bearvalley3365 chapter 7 . 8/27/2013
I really love this story so far & yes i think it would be a awesome idea if you write one of your stories as a comic book. If you have any information about SOAP, could you please spread the word through your work, & to other people as well?
ShinyShiny9 chapter 6 . 8/25/2013
No, don't stop! The running joke about Knuckles hating Sonic's chuckle is great. Poor Knux, I hope he gets his own back . . . I like him better than Sonic anyway. What the hey, go ahead and punch him again, Knuckles. :P
bearvalley3365 chapter 6 . 8/25/2013
You didn't have to apologize because you were sick, it happens to everyone. I do have to agree with Knuckles though he made a very good point that they all worked together equally & yet Sonic gets most of the credit, that was ultra mega rude of the SEGA company to do which by the way Nintendo is now the company & i am hoping they treat all the characters as equal & not give most of the credit to Sonic. I am curious will the plan add the half - brothers of Noah Raymond Thompson a male panda bear & Spencer Timothy Metzner a male gorilla into this story? Just curious.
Jacob Prower chapter 6 . 8/25/2013
So thats where that came from. No wonder he doesn't chuckle. Awesome, just awesome.

Sincerely, Jacob Prower
starfiction123 chapter 5 . 8/25/2013
Rofl if knuckles hates sonics laugh that mudh dont show him sonics laugh in 06! He will kill him! Lol...but not colours though. I loove sonics laugh in colours...
bearvalley3365 chapter 5 . 8/24/2013
I hope that your headaches would just go away & you feel better.
bearvalley3365 chapter 4 . 8/24/2013
I thought this chapter is pretty funny also. Just is that why you don't really care for fan characters?
bearvalley3365 chapter 3 . 8/24/2013
This one is actually ultra mega funny.
bearvalley3365 chapter 2 . 8/24/2013
Even though i had never played any Sonic games let alone i just have 2 words to describe about Sonic 06, boo hisssss!
bearvalley3365 chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
I don't care if you do short chapters, this one is great so far.
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