wait he give the cloak to nevile

this was a fun read thanks for writing it

The clock is a Potter's heirloom...

I love this story. Thanks for writing it for us

That’s Harry’s cloak! DUMBLEDORE! YOU FUCKING BASTARD!

Why the fuck did everybody immediately jump to the worst conclusion

I really loved this story.

Theres a rather large error with the timeline mentioned a couple times so far in this chapter (4). It was stated previously that Hasan visited Daigon Alley on July 31st. However its now been said on September 1st that he met Draco there the day before. It seems a month is missing.

I figured the Dementor flashback was a memory belonging to the Horcrux in Hasan/Harry's scar (via the connection to the Horcrux in the Diary they were looking at somehow.)

OMG... Ok, I don't think this can be a mistake, because it is too ridiculous... so I am guessing this is a major plot point ... if you are going to do what I think you are ... I am not sure if memories can work that way but friggin' ell!

First chapter was pretty interesting, and second chapter alluding to Harry taking up residence at the Leaky for a while as an introduction to magic had me excited! I don't see a lot of that in fanfics! But then your introduction of Altair unfortunately lost me, I'm afraid. It came off a bit too hand-wavy and by your descriptions he sounded a bit too Gary Stu to keep my interest.

Your fic is probably great still, with as many favourites as it has collected you're surely doing something right! So perhaps one day I'll return to it when I have more patience to keep up suspension of disbelief through the introductory chapters.

C

I pronounce Hasan as (Hah-San) except a bit quicker so you barely hear the second h but still know its there

For future stories never Hermione/Ron. Theo would be different and a better match with her intelligence.

The mystery is good. We learn as Harry does