|Reviews for Return to you|
| novaking2832 chapter 19 . 12/24/2013
Oooooo, Cliff hanger. I'd Lapis like a clone that is connected to Ruby or something. That's the only logical explanation I have for the whole they are very similar thing
| Dead Bones Sam chapter 19 . 12/24/2013
Interesting selection for the fez holders, I'm sure Ruby would love Amaru if he was there
| Vikeila chapter 19 . 12/24/2013
Ooooh a battle, hehe... I bet on Sapphire .
I never imagined that introducing somewhat ten pokemon would need so many words. I wouldn't have the patience to write that much probably :D
I'm so interested about what's in Cianwood! Went to check it out and saw that Suicune sometimes appears there . :3 he's one of my fav legendaries. But what could be so important for Lapis there and why would Ruby appear there O.O I honestly have no clue.
| Nornichica chapter 18 . 12/22/2013
It started off good, mhmm. Also, I think Lapis should NOT be Ruby that would just be weird. Now, if Sapphire liked Lapis and leaned on him because he reminded her of Ruby and she missed her boyfriend, that would make sense and I would understand that. I think it would be more dramatic if you had SaphXRubyXLapis, but obviously it's clearly SaphXRuby, if that makes any sense to you. Would make it more exciting xD
| Guest chapter 18 . 12/17/2013
ALAS AN UPDATE! I have been checking back religiously every day for the past week *-*
Loved the Slowking/queen game and you did an amazing job incorporating the requests and the game with Lapis' and Sapphire's conversation. Such a pity that the question about the secret did not target Lapis! ): that would have been fun to read and to further decode his enigmatic persona.
Red's and Gold's tasks were fantastic! Couldn't help laughing as I read (:
Lastly, 'connection', huh? Could they have swapped places in time or space, until Ruby or Lapis have done their jobs? Hmm so many questions and so many answers yet to come. Can't wait for the next chapter keep it up
| Dead Bones Sam chapter 18 . 12/17/2013
I feel like you hate gold or something XD excellent job, look forward to the next chapter
| Vikeila chapter 18 . 12/17/2013
*bows for the solo clap* :D thanks
that was hilarious :D couldn't keep the grin off my face.
but you better hurry up on the next chapter ;)
| h chapter 15 . 12/7/2013
Numbers: 8 and 11
Order: Tell us one thing that we don't know about you
| Vikeila chapter 17 . 12/7/2013
Ah, Gold, that despicable mastermind. But that's why i like him .
The part with the lanterns was so fluffy and the picture taking made me giggle.
Also two of my fav ghost types were included so I'm happy and fluffed for at least a day :D
| Dead Bones Sam chapter 17 . 12/6/2013
That was a cute little chapter, I can only imagine whose kissing who tho lol
| facelessclocks chapter 16 . 12/2/2013
nuuuuu why isn't there an update yet )': I've been waiting in dire anticipation for the past week! Shall leave a review, then.
I'm a little confused about the 'game' that you've created. Hmm..that aside, I think you're really improving in creating suspense in your story not just through cliffhangers but also from what the characters say or don't say (: And good job on the 'clues' hahaha it further supports my belief about Lapis' identity
Feeling so troubled and cornered for Saph — HANG IN THERE OMG so many more badges to go!
| 12courtney12 chapter 16 . 11/30/2013
| jonjames427 chapter 9 . 11/30/2013
maybe ruby is running an errand in the name of celibi to repay his debt for her assistance.
| novaking2832 chapter 16 . 11/23/2013
Yeah yeah! Now that's a good chapter. Excellent, just fantastic please keep it up
| Dead Bones Sam chapter 16 . 11/22/2013
Lapis is starting to sound like a dick, he should be at least somewhat honest with her